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中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處錯(cuò)誤。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧）, 并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Yesterday morning, I was surprising to hear that my best friend Allee has been

hit by a car and was in hospital. The other day when he was going to cross a street,

he was such careful that he didn’t go until he saw the traffic light to turn green. But

hardly had he got to the middle of the street while he saw a car suddenly appear on

his right-hand side and come directly towards them. It was too late for Allee to

escape. He was hit by the car or was thrown a few meters away. He was sent to the

nearest hospital immediately and had operation. When I went to see him, he was

out of dangers but still looked pale. I sincere hope he will recover and return to

normal as soon as possible.

 

【答案】

 surprising改成surprised

 has改成had

 such改成so

 to去掉 

 while改成when

 them改成 him

 or改成 and

 operation 前面加an

 dangers改成danger

 sincere改成sincerely

【解析】

 修飾主語(yǔ)用過(guò)去分詞轉(zhuǎn)換的形容詞

 他被車(chē)撞是之前已經(jīng)發(fā)生的事情

 后面的形容詞，用so修飾

 see sb do sth   

 固定句型hardly…when…一…就…

 him指代Allee

 上下文不是選擇關(guān)系，而是并列關(guān)系

 operation是可數(shù)名詞，用a修飾

 固定詞組out of danger

 副詞修飾動(dòng)詞

 

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