Question

閱讀下面一則廣告，按照要求完成寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。
ETL International English Summer Camp
Volunteer Wanted
EIL was founded in Britain in 1936 with the fundamental aim of international understanding“Learn to live together by living together”.
Requirements: Over 16; good knowledge of English; outgoing; working well with children between 7-12
Activities: Language study, outdoor recreation and travel
Campers： Students from different countries
Camp site：Mount Wuyi, Fujian
Time: July 26-August 9
Application deadline： July 15, 2012
If interested, please e-mail to info@eiuk.org
假設(shè)你是李華，這則廣告引起了你的興趣，請(qǐng)用英文寫(xiě)一封自薦信。
要點(diǎn)如下：
1.對(duì)夏令營(yíng)主題的理解；2.根據(jù)招聘要求自我介紹；3.參加夏令營(yíng)的目的。
注意：1.信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.詞數(shù)120左右。
Dear Sir,
I’m Li Hua from Fujian.                                           
                                                                
                                                                
I am looking forward to your early reply.                
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Sir,
I’m Li Hua from Fujian, When I was reading the advertisement, the aim of this activity impressed me greatly. I think it instructive to learn to live together by living together. It is a good opportunity for the only child like me to learn to share and work together. Therefore I recommend myself to you without hesitation.
As a boy of 17, I am outgoing, good at English and have experience of working well with children aged from 7 to 12. I think it is a kind of win-win activity. For one thing, I can help take care of the children. For another thing, I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life during the summer vacation.
 I am looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua

解析試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文。假設(shè)你是李華，這則廣告引起了你的興趣，請(qǐng)用英文寫(xiě)一封自薦信。要點(diǎn)如下：1.對(duì)夏令營(yíng)主題的理解；2.根據(jù)招聘要求自我介紹；3.參加夏令營(yíng)的目的。需要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實(shí)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型為文章潤(rùn)色。注意要求的詞數(shù)120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】I think it is a kind of win-win activity.這里含有一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句。
考點(diǎn)：話題類書(shū)面表達(dá)