請根據(jù)以下提示,并結合具體事例,用英語寫一篇短文。
Small things make a big difference. The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.
注意:①無須寫標題; ②除詩歌外,文體不限;
③內(nèi)容必須結合你生活中的具體事例;
④文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱;
⑤詞數(shù)不少于120,如引用提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)。


It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible member of society.
I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital. Compared with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.
As a member of the society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.

解析本文是篇英語材料作文,材料非常簡單,學生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的?忌趯懽髦氨匦枵J真審題,首先要注意文章是要求結合具體的事例,所以一般都是發(fā)生過的,故描述是要用一般過去時。既然是具體事例來理解,因此最好用第一人稱。再有就是寫的事例內(nèi)容一定要符合所給的主題,并形成文章主題的首尾呼應從而提高作文的檔次。
【亮點說明】文章第一句It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible member of society就鮮明概括并亮出了作者的觀點。文中使用了定語從句I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon以及非限制性定語從句which drove off quickly都為文章增色不少,一些短語和短句的使用也恰到好處比如knock down,drive off,be proud of, rush to sb to do sth,compare with等并注意了句子的銜接如: when, luckily 等等。
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