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4．昨天，我參加了一個會議，其間，兩個學生進行了一個關于因特網(wǎng)的優(yōu)勢和弱點的辯論．
他們表達了各種各樣的關于因特網(wǎng)的觀點，這是我以前從沒有想到過的．例如，一些專家認為，花費大量時間在因特網(wǎng)上的結果（outcome）是在形成社會紐帶（bonds）方面的困難．他們毫不諱言這樣一個事實，因特網(wǎng)使用者花費了更多的時間與他們的因特網(wǎng)朋友在一起，遠遠多于與他們的來自工作和學校的真實生活中的朋友在一起．這是一個警醒（alarm  sb）我們的因特網(wǎng)的不幸的方面．
他們還表述了一些因特網(wǎng)的好的方面．使我映象深刻的是，在因特網(wǎng)的幫助下，最新的信息只是一次在鍵盤上的敲擊就可以發(fā)送出去（a click away）．通過使用因特網(wǎng)，我們還可以和遠方的人們在各個領域保持一致，這對于不能長時間離開家的殘疾的人們來說尤其重要．
雙方呈現(xiàn)了大量的數(shù)據(jù)來支持他們的觀點．我自己的判斷是因特網(wǎng)在整體上是有益的．因特網(wǎng)只是我們工作、生活中的工具，是人們本身，而不是因特網(wǎng)真正重要（count）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Yesterday I went to a conference，where two students had a debate about the strength and weakness of the Internet
高分句型二：
What impressed me most is that up-to-date information is only a click away with the help of the Internet．
句型一 where two students had a debate about the strength and weakness of the Internet 該句是一個由where引導的非限制性定語從句，where在從句中作地點狀語，先行詞為conference表地點
句型二 What impressed me most is that up-to-date information..該句是一個由what引導的主語從句，what在從句中作主語，注意：當從句作主語時，謂語用單數(shù)

解答 Yesterday I went to a conference，where two students had a debate about the strength and weakness of the Internet．（提出論點）（高分句型一）
     They made diverse points about the Internet that I had never thought about before．For example，some experts think that the outcome of spending too much time on the Internet is the difficulty in forming social bonds．They were also quite explicit about the fact how serious Internet users spend more time with their Internet friends than with their real-life friends from school and work．This is an unfortunate aspect of the Internet that alarms us．（反對觀點）
     They also addressed good points of the Internet，as well．What impressed me most is that up-to-date information is only a click away with the help of the Internet．（高分句型二）By using the Internet，we can also correspond with people in distant places，which is very important for disabled people who cannot always leave their homes．（贊同觀點）
     Both sides presented lots of statistics to support their arguments．My own judgment is that the Internet is beneficial on the whole．The Internet is only a tool in our work and life．It is not the Internet but people themselves that really count．（客觀對待因特網(wǎng)）

點評 該書面表達為讀寫任務型作文，該篇作文規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應的寫作要點．考生在平時應注意積累相應的詞匯和短語，在寫作時盡量做到將要點與主題緊密結合，用準確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．