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19．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班的班長(zhǎng)李華，你們?nèi)�班同學(xué)在"五一節(jié)"放假期間開(kāi)展了"體驗(yàn)一天低碳生活"的活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫(xiě)一篇英文短文，介紹同學(xué)們這一天的體驗(yàn)活動(dòng)，向?qū)W校"英語(yǔ)園地"投稿．短文的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好．詞數(shù)不少于60．
    提示詞：disposable chopsticks一次性筷子

A Low-carbon Day
    The students in our class took part in an activity of"Experience a Low-carbon Day"during the Labor Day vacation．…

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫(huà)作文，讓我們寫(xiě)一篇英文短文，介紹同學(xué)們低碳生活這一天的體驗(yàn)活動(dòng)，向?qū)W校"英語(yǔ)園地"投稿，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語(yǔ)思維，將提供的信息用英語(yǔ)完整流暢的表達(dá)出來(lái)．寫(xiě)作需要用第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：全班同學(xué)在"五一節(jié)"放假期間開(kāi)展了"體驗(yàn)一天低碳生活"的活動(dòng)．介紹同學(xué)們這一天的體驗(yàn)活動(dòng)．我們此篇作文分為三部分，第一部分為體驗(yàn)活動(dòng)的主題．第二部分為體驗(yàn)活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容．第三部分為倡導(dǎo)呼吁．
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)與句型：
take part in  參加
environmentally friendly bags  環(huán)保袋
electric fans 電扇
rather than 而不是
高分句型一：In the morning，we went to the park by bus instead of by car，which means choosing a low-carbon transportation．此句用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句
高分句型二：I think what we did on that day was meaningful，which helped us form a good habit．此句what we did on that day 是主語(yǔ)從句，which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句
高分句型三：Only with joint efforts can we create a better world．此句only+介詞短語(yǔ)，主句部分倒裝

解答 A Low-carbon Day
The students in our class took part in an activity of"Experience a Low-carbon Day"at the weekend．（體驗(yàn)活動(dòng)的主題）
In the morning，we went to the park by bus instead of by car，which means choosing a low-carbon transportation．（高分句型一） At noon，when having lunch in a restaurant，we refused to use the disposable chopsticks served there．Instead，we each took with us a pair of chopsticks．Besides，to avoid the damage of plastic bags，we carried environmentally friendly bags with us when shopping in the afternoon．We didn't come home until late in the evening．Being extremely hot，we used electric fans to cool ourselves down rather than air-conditioners．（體驗(yàn)活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容）
I think what we did on that day was meaningful，which helped us form a good habit（高分句型二）．Also，we should call on the people around us to take action．Only with joint efforts can we create a better world．（高分句型三）（倡導(dǎo)呼吁）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．