Question

【題目】請(qǐng)以“ The Biggest Challenge I’ve Ever Met” 為題寫一篇120詞左右的短文，記述自己遭遇過的最大的挑戰(zhàn)。內(nèi)容包括：

1. 簡(jiǎn)要記述事情經(jīng)過；

2. 你的感受或從中獲得的啟示。

注意：1.短文的標(biāo)題和開頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)姓名及任何透露考生身份信息的內(nèi)容。

The Biggest Challenge I’ve Ever Met

In our daily life, we unavoidably come across various challenges now and then.

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Answer 1

【答案】

The Biggest Challenge I’ve Ever Met

In our daily life, we unavoidably come across various challenges now and then.

The biggest challenge in my life happened when I entered senior high school. I was shocked to find what the physics teacher taught was totally beyond me and I lost my confidence completely. Thinking I just lacked the gift for physics, I stopped making efforts and my grades were poor. Fortunately, my teacher didn’t give up on me. Instead, she helped me analyze my problem and I realized I needed to rise to challenges bravely. I regained my confidence, adjusted my approaches and worked hard. Now I’m one of the top students in physics.

From the above experience, I’ve learned that it is not our inborn gifts but our efforts that help us achieve success. When confronted with challenges, we should fight bravely instead of giving up.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)屬于記敘文，根據(jù)提示信息，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。本文寫作時(shí)先記敘事情，再表達(dá)感受。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般過去時(shí)。 4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如when I entered senior high school是時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句；what the physics teacher taught 是名詞性從句；還有強(qiáng)調(diào)句I’ve learned that it is not our inborn gifts but our efforts that help us achieve success.。此外，文章還使用了大量短語(yǔ) now and then，make efforts，give up on me,等；副詞 unavoidably, completely, totally, fortunately, bravely的使用，使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語(yǔ)言更加連貫。