Question

14．看書(shū)、看電視、玩電腦、體育運(yùn)動(dòng)、參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)等．你喜歡做什么？請(qǐng)結(jié)合下面的提示詞，以My Spare Time為題寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文，談?wù)勀愕臉I(yè)余生活．你是如何合理安排的呢？說(shuō)說(shuō)你的想法和理由．
提示詞語(yǔ)：busy，play，healthy，knowledge，housework，relax，volunteer，colorful
要求：
1．短文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以上提示的內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2．書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，句式規(guī)范，條理清楚．有表達(dá)自己觀點(diǎn)的句子．
3．不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和地名．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
 They give us much knowledge that we can't learn at school．
高分句型二：
So reading books is the best way of spending my spare time．
句型一  that we can't learn at school．該句是一個(gè)由that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，that在從句中作賓語(yǔ)，替代前面提到的先行詞knowledge．
句型二 reading books is the best way of…該句的主語(yǔ)是一個(gè)動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)組成，當(dāng)句子主語(yǔ)為動(dòng)名詞或者動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)時(shí)，應(yīng)注意謂語(yǔ)使用單數(shù)
此外，該文章中還有以下重要短語(yǔ)和詞匯：
be busy with 忙于某事   the best way of doing sth 做某事的最好方式   be in need 需要
重要句型和重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)的結(jié)合使用，使得文章表達(dá)更有層次，表達(dá)更為準(zhǔn)確

解答 I am a middle school student．Though I'm busy with my lessons，my spare time is still colorful．After school I usually play sports．I like basketball and football very much．Sports help me to keep healthy and study better．I often do some reading in the evening．I think books are our best friends．They give us much knowledge that we can't learn at school．（高分句型一）So reading books is the best way of spending my spare time．（高分句型二）Sometimes I watch TV or surf the Internet．（業(yè)余生活描述）I find it's a good way to relax myself．At the same time it can also help me open up my eyes to the outside world．At the weekends I often help my parents with the housework．I clean the house，wash clothes and learn to cook．During the summer or winter vacation，I have enough time to do things like volunteering．I help those people who are in need．It's a good experience for me．I enjoy myself in my spare time．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇開(kāi)放式作文，寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文．需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．