Question

假設(shè)你是李華，前天是你的外國(guó)朋友Anne的生日。你本答應(yīng)要參加她的生日聚會(huì)，但你當(dāng)時(shí)正忙著準(zhǔn)備期末考試，不小心忘了赴約。請(qǐng)寫封信向Anne表達(dá)你的歉意，說明原因，并提出補(bǔ)救的方法。
注意：1.詞數(shù)120詞左右；
2.文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)班級(jí)和姓名；  
3.可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。
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Answer 1

a possible version：
Dear Anne,
I am indeed very sorry that I didn’t attend your birthday party the day before yesterday.I feel awful about it and want to apologize to you.
It was nice of you to invite me to your birthday party. I shoud have come and celebrated the precious moment with you . But the end-of-term examination is around the corner, so I was too busy preparing for the exam that I   forgot the appointment. I hope you can understand my situation and forgive me.  Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting after the examination? I do long for a pleasant chat with you .
It is much to my regret that I missed the chance of such a happy get-together. Once again,please accept my sincere apology.
Yours truly,
Li Hua

解析試題分析：本文是一篇書信體裁的書面表達(dá)。首先要注意書信的格式，即：稱呼、正文和結(jié)尾。分析本篇書面表達(dá)的要求，書信可以分為三方面內(nèi)容，即表達(dá)歉意，解釋理由，然后提出補(bǔ)救的措施。根據(jù)書信的特點(diǎn)，在信的開頭要開門見山提出寫信的目的，在本文是要表達(dá)自己爽約的歉意。因?yàn)閷懽鞅疚牡哪康氖堑狼�，所以語(yǔ)言一定要誠(chéng)懇，禮貌�？墒褂玫亩陶Z(yǔ)句型有：I am very sorry that …;forgive sb for doing ,I apologize to sb for doing sth , 在寫作時(shí)還要注意語(yǔ)言的連貫流暢，要適當(dāng)使用連接詞，使上下文語(yǔ)義緊湊。此外，寫作時(shí)還要注意時(shí)態(tài)和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的正確使用。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇書面表達(dá)語(yǔ)言自然流暢，段落清楚，層次分明。在本文中作者使用indeed 、awful、sincere、should have come和I do long for a pleasant chat with you等詞語(yǔ)和結(jié)構(gòu)表達(dá)了自己深深的歉意和誠(chéng)懇的請(qǐng)求，用詞非常貼切，此外，高級(jí)詞匯long for、around the corner 、precious的運(yùn)用也顯示了作者對(duì)詞語(yǔ)的準(zhǔn)確把握和駕馭能力。在文章中作者還使用了多種句型結(jié)構(gòu)，如結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句I was so busy preparing for the exam that I forgot the appointment.，強(qiáng)調(diào)句型It is much to my regret that I missed the chance of such a happy get-together等，所有這些都使文章亮點(diǎn)紛呈，可以說是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的范文。
考點(diǎn)：考查提綱作文。