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11．假設(shè)你正在參加全省中學(xué)生英語演講比賽，請你針對有些父母經(jīng)常翻看孩子日記或書包這一現(xiàn)象，寫一篇演講稿，陳述你的觀點．
演講稿的主要內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：
認為同學(xué)們不必為此苦惱；
希望能夠體諒父母的苦衷；
建議與父母進行交流和溝通．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Good morning，ladies and gentleman．
Some of us are having problems with our parents，as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries．
I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it，but there's no need to feel too sad．Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we're not getting into any trouble．They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same．Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong．My suggestion is：Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we'd like to trust them．If you don't think you can talk to them，write them a letter and leave it lying around----they are bound to read it．
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇演講稿．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來展開敘述．主要內(nèi)容包括：一點名話題，認為同學(xué)們不必為此苦惱；二解釋父母這樣做的原因和苦衷；三建議與父母進行交流和溝通．
高分句型：
1．I fully understand why（why引導(dǎo)賓語從句） we are not comfortable about it，but there's no need to feel too sad．
句子里的there's no need to do是固定句式，表示"做某事沒有必要"
我完全理解我們會對此感到不舒服，但是沒有必要為此而傷心．
2．If you don't think you can talk to them，write them a letter and leave it lying around----they are bound to read it．
句子里 leave it lying 表示"把信放在某地"，lying 的原形是lie表示"躺，平放，位于"； are bound to do 表示"一定會"．
如果你不愿意和他們談，你可以給他們寫一封信放在一個顯眼的地方，他們肯定會讀這封信的．

解答 Good morning，ladies and gentlemen．
    Some of us are having problem with our parents，as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries．I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it，but there's no need to feel too sad．【高分句型一】（點名話題，認為同學(xué)們不必為此苦惱；）Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we're not getting into any trouble．They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same．Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong．（解釋父母這樣做的原因和苦衷）My suggestion is：Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we'd like to trust them．If you don't think you can talk to them，write them a letter and leave it lying around----they are bound to read it．【高分句型二】（建議與父母進行交流和溝通）

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