Question

1．在緊張的高三備考階段，英語(yǔ)老師為了提高復(fù)習(xí)效率，廣泛征求學(xué)生意見(jiàn)假如你叫張華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給英語(yǔ)王老師寫(xiě)封信．表達(dá)你們的需求和建議．
●適當(dāng)放慢進(jìn)度，留出思考時(shí)間；
●反復(fù)訓(xùn)練重要、易錯(cuò)知識(shí)點(diǎn)；
●指導(dǎo)方法；
●減少作業(yè)量以保證質(zhì)量：
●給予更多鼓勵(lì)．
注意：
1．根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇短文，不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫．
2．詞數(shù)：不少于l00詞．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，小計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Mr．Wang，
We're so pleased that you are willing to share our views．
In the course of the general revision，what we need is solid foundation．
       ．
Yours sincerely，
Zhang Hua．

Answer 1

分析 亮點(diǎn)句型一：As for those important points which also make us confused，would you please give us more practice in case we forget？至于那些讓我們困惑的重要點(diǎn)，請(qǐng)你多練習(xí)一下好嗎以防我們忘記了．此句中which引導(dǎo)的是限制性定語(yǔ)從句，被修飾的先行詞為points，which在從句中做主語(yǔ)；in case"萬(wàn)一，以防"是連詞，引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句．
亮點(diǎn)句型二：We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time．如果您能給我們一些不時(shí)的鼓勵(lì)，我們將不勝感激．We would appreciate it if 用的是虛擬語(yǔ)氣"如果…我們將不勝感激"．

解答 Dear Mr．Wang，
     We're so pleased that you are willing to share our views．
     In the course of the general revision，what we need is solid foundation．As you know，we didn't learn well enough in the first two years，so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something．Besides，we need a little more time to think for ourselves．As for those important points which also make us confused，
would you please give us more practice in case we forget（亮點(diǎn)句型一）？Meanwhile，we need your instruction，for example，how to write in natural English．I still have another request：assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently．【表達(dá)需求】
     By the way，we often feel frustrated，which has a very bad effect on our study．We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time（亮點(diǎn)句型二）．【尋求建議】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．