Question

13．月20日是中國學生營養(yǎng)日．某中學生英文報為此開展征文比賽活動，請根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇征文，談談你對中國肥胖兒童現(xiàn)象的看法和建議．
內(nèi)容要點：
1．描述現(xiàn)狀：中國肥胖兒童1200多萬；
2．說明理由：常吃快餐、缺少鍛煉；
3．提出建議：…
注意：
1．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當發(fā)揮，但不要逐條翻譯；
2．詞數(shù)120左右．
參考詞匯：肥胖：obesity；營養(yǎng)：nutrition
No More Child Obesity．

Answer 1

分析 亮點句型一：One of the primary factors that account for the problem is children's addiction to junk food，which adds too much fat and sugar to whoever takes it．這個問題的主要原因是孩子們對于垃圾食品上癮，這些垃圾食品給吃的人增加了太多的脂肪．本句是一個復合句，that 引導的是一個限制性定語從句，先行詞為factors；which引導的是非限制性定語從句，先行詞為junk food．
亮點句型二：A large number of children would rather sit for hours enjoying themselves in a virtual world than work our regularly．很多的孩子寧愿坐幾個小時享受自己在虛擬世界里也不愿定期鍛煉．would rather do…than do…是"寧愿做某事也不愿做某事"是英語中的固定句型．

解答 Recent yeats have witnessed a growing number of up to 12 million children in China getting more and more overweight．【現(xiàn)狀描述】
When it comes to the obesity problem，the reasons are not far to seek．One of the primary factors that account for the problem is children's addiction to junk food，which adds too much fat and sugar to whoever takes it（亮點句型一）．Another factor to mention is children's lack of exercise in everyday life．A large number of children would rather sit for hours enjoying themselves in a virtual world than exercise regularly（亮點句型二）．To make matters worse，the fact that many children stay up late into night also contributes to the problem．【闡明原因】
Personally I do believe it is of great importance to keep a balanced diet，which guarantees proper nutrition in our diet．What's more，a healthy  lifestyle is the key to a happy life．After all，it is a healthy body and mind that really matters in promising us a brighter future．【個人觀點】

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．