Question

7．When was the last time you had fun with your parents？Your parents are all busy during working days； during the weekends，you may want to hang out with them but they may have to work extra hours．
This is not uncommon．In China，both of the parents have their jobs．Most of the parents try their best to offer their children comfortable circumstances，but they seldom have time to stay with their children．A recent survey done in the US found that more than half of American parents spend less than three hours having fun with their children each week．
As the Daily Mail noted：Families are spending little quality time creating bonds and precious memories together during the week because of the demands of modern life．

【寫作內(nèi)容】
1．用約30個單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；
2．簡要分析父母陪伴孩子的時間越來越少的原因；
3．結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，談?wù)劯改付嗯惆楹⒆訉ζ浜⒆拥挠绊懀?br />【寫作要求】
1．寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
3．不必寫標題．
Suggested version：
Nowadays，it is not uncommon that parents spend little time accompanying their children，which may result from the demands of modern life and some other reasons．（26）
There are many factors accounting for this phenomenon．First，in contemporary society parents are facing more stress from living and work than before，so they have to spend most of their time making money．In addition，parents today are more easily distracted by various electronic products when keeping their children company．
Take my own experience for example．Once upon a time，I got into trouble in my studies．It was my parents'company and comfort that had a great effect on my regaining self-confidence．Plain and peaceful as it was，this experience left an unforgettable impression on me，which is of great significance to my growth．．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
Nowadays，it is not uncommon that parents spend little time accompanying their children，which may result from the demands of modern life and some other reasons
如今，父母很少花時間陪伴孩子，這可能是現(xiàn)代生活的需要和其他原因造成的．這是很平常的．
高分句型二：
In addition，parents today are more easily distracted by various electronic products when keeping their children company．
另外，現(xiàn)在的家長更容易被各種電子產(chǎn)品吸引在陪伴孩子時．

解答 Suggested version：
     Nowadays，it is not uncommon that parents spend little time accompanying their children，which may result from the demands of modern life and some other reasons（高分句型一）．
    There are many factors accounting for this phenomenon．First，in contemporary society parents are facing more stress from living and work than before，so they have to spend most of their time making money．In addition，parents today are more easily distracted by various electronic products when keeping their children company（高分句型二）．
    Take my own experience for example．Once upon a time，I got into trouble in my studies．It was my parents'company and comfort that had a great effect on my regaining self-confidence．Plain and peaceful as it was，this experience left an unforgettable impression on me，which is of great significance to my growth．

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．