Question

19．假如你是學生李華，于2016 年3 月12 日植樹節(jié)，參加了學校組織的高一、高二學生徒步10公里到東錢湖植樹活動．就此活動，請用英語寫一篇日記，并談談你的感受．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100 左右；
    2．可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫；
    3．不能泄露自己的真實信息（如：姓名和校名）．
（參考詞匯：徒步vi．hike   植樹節(jié) Tree-Planting Day）
Mar.12^th，2016
                                                

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）Talking and laughing happily，we set off for Dongqian Lake on foot in the morning．
該句使用了talking and laughing現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語，表示伴隨狀況，表示出發(fā)時候的狀態(tài)；
（高分句型二）Having covered a distance of 10 kilometers，we finally arrived at the destination．
having covered是非謂語表達，we和cover之間是主動關(guān)系，表示時間狀語；
（高分句型三）After that，we walked around and did some sightseeing，during which，I took many photos．
該句使用了介詞+which的非限制性定語從句，during表示在此期間；
高級詞匯：set off出發(fā)；cover指走過多少路程；arrived at the destination到達目的地；
upon+doing固定短語，一…就…；It's the first time that 表示第一次做某事；raised my awareness of the importance 提高意識…；
考生需注意：在敘述植樹事情的時候，要使用一般過去時，在表達自己感受時，需 用一般現(xiàn)在時；

解答 （該段敘述植樹活動內(nèi)容）Today is the National Tree-planting Day．Students of Senior Grade One and Two had a special spring-outing （spring excursion）．（高分句型一）Talking and laughing happily，we set off for Dongqian Lake on foot in the morning．（高分句型二）Having covered a distance of 10 kilometers，we finally arrived at the destination．Upon arriving there，we began to dig holes，plant trees and water the ones we planted．（高分句型三）After that，we walked around and did some sightseeing，during which，I took many photos．
    （表達自己的感受）It's the first time that I have walked so long and taken part in such an environmentally-friendly tour．The beautiful scenery raised my awareness of the importance to protect the environment，while planting trees helped me better understand my classmates and learn to cooperate better．I am glad I have done my part．

點評 考生需根據(jù)所提供的信息提煉文章的寫作主題，需了解寫作要點及寫作意圖，仔細構(gòu)思寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時注意積累詞匯及語法知識．