Question

14．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下短文．短文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞．
2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起） 不計分　　
　　I live in a distant village in the mountains，there people like raising dogs．I have an adult dog and he was big in size．Last week，the relative sent me two little dogs．They were unable to walk well，even fall to the ground now and then．They moved like two fur balls，funny and lovely．
　　However，I feared that if the adult dog might dislike them and even attack them．So I kept the two little one in a box．One day，I was astonishing to see the adult dog lying in the box．Under them comfortably lay the two little dogs!Now the three dogs get along well one another and live happy together．

Answer 1

分析 作者住在一個人人都喜歡養(yǎng)狗的村子里，作者本人也養(yǎng)了一條大狗．上周親戚又送來了兩條還不會走路的小狗，由于擔心大狗可能會襲擊小狗，作者就把它們放在了一個箱子里．可是有一天，作者吃驚地發(fā)現(xiàn)大狗也鉆進了箱子，幸福地摟著兩條小狗．

解答 I live in a distant village in the mountains，there people like raising dogs．I have an adult dog and he was big in size．Last week，the relative sent me two little dogs．They were unable to walk well，even fall to the ground now and then．They moved like two fur balls，funny and lovely．
　　However，I feared that if the adult dog might dislike them and even attack them．So I kept the two little one in a box．One day，I was astonishing to see the adult dog lying in the box．Under them comfortably lay the two little dogs!Now the three dogs get along well∧one another and live happy together．
詳解：
1．there改為where；考查關(guān)系副詞，此處用關(guān)系副詞where在句中作狀語．
2．was改為is；考查動詞的時態(tài)，此處用一般現(xiàn)在時陳述一個客觀情況，故用一般現(xiàn)在時is．
3．the改為a；考查冠詞，此處relative是可數(shù)名詞，在文中第一次提到，故用不定冠詞a表示泛指．
4．fall改為falling；考查分詞作狀語，主語they與動詞fall之間是主謂關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞形式作狀語．
5．去掉if；考查名詞性從句，分析句意為"我擔心成年狗會…"，此處不表條件，故把if去掉．
6．one改為ones；考查代詞的數(shù)，這里one是代詞，前面有基數(shù)詞two修飾，故用復(fù)數(shù)形式ones．
7．a(chǎn)stonishing改為astonished；考查分詞作形容詞，現(xiàn)在分詞做形容詞修飾物，過去分詞做形容詞修飾人，此處主語是I，故用過去分詞形式．
8．them改為it；考查代詞，此處代詞指代上一句的the adult dog，故用單數(shù)形式it．
9．well后面加with；考查介詞，get along well with sb是固定短語，意為"與某人相處得很好"．
10．happy改為happily；考查副詞，此處用副詞作狀語修飾動詞live．

點評 短文改錯題首先要整體理解短文意思，抓住中心思想，結(jié)合語境和上下文關(guān)系，充分運用平時掌握的固定搭配，習(xí)慣用法，句型結(jié)構(gòu)等等來發(fā)現(xiàn)文章的錯誤之處，加以修正．