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15．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班學(xué)生李華．最近你和同學(xué)組織了"文明使用共享單車"的活動(dòng)，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，給校刊"英語角"寫一篇稿件介紹你們的活動(dòng)過程．注意：詞數(shù)不少于60．
提示詞：1．civilized 文明的
2．leaflets 宣傳單

Recently，the increasing popularity of shared bikes has made our lives more convenient．However，my classmates and I often noticedsome shared bikesplaced messily everywhere．We felt upsetand decided to make a change to the uncivilizedbehavior．
First，we had a heated discussion about the problem at our class meeting．We shared our ideas and came up with a great plan．After making full preparations，we startedto take action．
On Saturday morning，we gathered outside the subway station near our school．Firstly，we began with those messy shared bikesthere and tried to put themin order．People passing by all appreciated what we did．Seeing the bikes in rows on the pavement，we really felt excited．Then，in order to encourage people's civilized behavior，weput upa poster saying"PLEASE BE CIVILIZED WHILE USING A SHARED BIKE"．Meanwhile，some of us helped to give out leaflets．Of course，we drew much attention from the passers-by．Hopefully our action would make a difference．
This experience actually inspires me a lot．The idea of sharing requires people's awareness of civilization．When the uncivilized behavior occurs，it is our duty to do our best to stop it．I strongly believe that in this way our society will become better and better．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖畫類作文，根據(jù)提示信息最近你和同學(xué)組織了"文明使用共享單車"的活動(dòng)，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，給校刊"英語角"寫一篇稿件介紹你們的活動(dòng)過程．寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，2、要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
（高分句型一）my classmates and I often noticed some shared bikes placed messily everywhere．
該句使用了notice sth done結(jié)構(gòu)，看到…被…看到共享單車被放的論七八糟‘'
（高分句型二）Seeing the bikes in rows on the pavement，we really felt excited．
seeing是非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)，即現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語，和句子的主語we是主動(dòng)關(guān)系；
高級詞匯：came up with提出；take action采取行動(dòng)；it is our duty to…做某事是我們的職責(zé)…

解答 Recently，the increasing popularity of shared bikes has made our lives more convenient．However，（高分句型一）my classmates and I often noticed some shared bikes placed messily everywhere．（圖一內(nèi)容）We felt upset and decided to make a change to the uncivilized behavior．
    First，（圖二內(nèi)容）we had a heated discussion about the problem at our class meeting．We shared our ideas and came up with a great plan．After making full preparations，we started to take action．
    On Saturday morning，we gathered outside the subway station near our school．Firstly，（圖三內(nèi)容）we began with those messy shared bikes there and tried to put them in order．People passing by all appreciated what we did．（高分句型二）Seeing the bikes in rows on the pavement，we really felt excited．Then，in order to encourage people's civilized behavior，（圖四內(nèi)容）we put up a poster saying"PLEASE BE CIVILIZED WHILE USING A SHARED BIKE"．Meanwhile，some of us helped to give out leaflets．Of course，we drew much attention from the passers-by．Hopefully our action would make a difference．
    This experience actually inspires me a lot．The idea of sharing requires people's awareness of civilization．When the uncivilized behavior occurs，it is our duty to do our best to stop it．I strongly believe that in this way our society will become better and better．

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