分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖畫類作文,根據(jù)提示信息針對五一前夕學(xué)校組織"我愛我家"的實(shí)踐周活動這一話題開展討論,大家發(fā)表了不同的看法,寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個要點(diǎn),分別從不同觀點(diǎn)和理由兩個方面來討論該話題.2、要根據(jù)圖畫進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.本文寫作時可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài),就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般過去時態(tài).4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):
(高分句型一) As the school appealed for our community spirit,we immediately moved into action,discussing what we could do for our community.
該句使用了as引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句,當(dāng)…時候;discussing是現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語表示伴隨;
(高分句型二)With our investigation going deeper,more and more problems were revealed.
該句使用了被動句型,即be revealed;
(高分句型三)What irritated us most was that some bikes were even deliberately damaged.
What irritated us most 是主語從句,意思是最使我們生氣的是;that some bikes…引導(dǎo)表語從句;
高級詞匯:currently目前地;put our idea into action付諸實(shí)施;to our excitement讓我們興奮地是;
解答 Various activities were organized in our school during the Social Practice Week themed"Love Our Community"before May Day Holiday.
(高分句型一) As the school appealed for our community spirit,we immediately moved into action,discussing what we could do for our community.Ideas like garbage classification,smog control all flashed through our minds.However,we finally decided to investigate the problem with the use of the currently popular shared bikes like Mobike and Ofo.(引出寫作話題)
Wasting no time,we immediately put our idea into action.(高分句型二)With our investigation going deeper,more and more problems were revealed.Some bikes were parked disorderly.Some were locked with personal locks.(高分句型三)What irritated us most was that some bikes were even deliberately damaged.We felt urgent action was needed to solve these problems.As a result,we posted the pictures we took on WeChat Moments,starting an initiative for the proper use of the shared bikes.Much to our excitement,people responded positively.Our post was read about 20,000 times,got 10,000 likes and received many encouraging comments.(分析共享單車現(xiàn)狀)
We felt a great sense of achievement,but we also know that the bike-sharing program will not work well until each and every member of our society watches their behavior and acts properly.
點(diǎn)評 本文是圖畫類寫作,考生在寫作前應(yīng)仔細(xì)觀察所給圖畫,再運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確的、合適的語言結(jié)合實(shí)際將圖片內(nèi)容描述清楚.寫作過程中切忌偏離主題,盡量做到圖文搭配.
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