Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Jim對(duì)中國的“新四大發(fā)明”(共享單車、高鐵、在線支付和網(wǎng)購)很感興趣，尤其是高鐵，特寫信向你詢問。請(qǐng)你給他回信，從速度(時(shí)速250-350公里)、舒適度、關(guān)注度等方面向他介紹一下我國高鐵。

注意:1、詞數(shù):100詞左右；

2、開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3、參考詞匯:高鐵 high-speed rail / high-speed trains

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

Glad to hear from you. Knowing that you are interested in China’s “four great new inventions”, especially our high-speed trains, I’d like to give a brief introduction to you.

China’s high-speed rail runs at a speed of 250-350 km per hour, providing people with a convenient and popular transport choice. Besides, it’s equipped with comfortable seats and a free wireless network. Furthermore, because of its various advantages, it has come to the global attention and many countries have imported Chinese high-speed rail technology to upgrade their own rail transport systems.

I hope that the information above will be helpful to you. If you have any further questions, please don’t hesitate to contact me.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封郵件。

第一步：

審題：郵件 介紹中國的高鐵

人稱：第三人稱

時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法，分三部分，第一部分說明很高興對(duì)方對(duì)我國的高鐵感興趣，第二部分介紹我國高鐵的具體情況，第三部分希望所提供的信息對(duì)對(duì)方有幫助。

要點(diǎn)：

1. 說明很高興對(duì)方對(duì)我國的高鐵感興趣

2．介紹我國高鐵的具體情況

①速度：時(shí)速為每小時(shí)250—350公里

②舒適度：配備有舒適的座椅、免費(fèi)無線網(wǎng)絡(luò)

③關(guān)注度：引起全球關(guān)注，很多國家進(jìn)口中國的高鐵

3．希望所提供的信息對(duì)對(duì)方有幫助。

第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞匯、短語）

be interested in；China’s “four great new inventions”；give a brief introduction；

at a speed of ；provide sb. with；choice；be equipped with；advantage；the global attention；import；upgrade；be helpful to

第三步：連詞成句

(1) You are interested in China’s “four great new inventions”.

(2) China’s high-speed rail runs at a speed of 250-350 km per hour.

(3) It provides people with a convenient and popular transport choice.

(4) It’s equipped with comfortable seats and a free wireless network.

(5) It has come to the global attention.

(6) Many countries have imported Chinese high-speed rail technology to upgrade their own rail transport systems.

(7)I hope that the information above will be helpful to you.

根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行遣詞造句,適當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用句型，注意時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致問題。

第四步：連句成篇(銜接詞)

表示時(shí)間順序： first of all; to begin/start with , in the beginning

firstly.... secondly .... lastly / finally/in the end

表示并列或補(bǔ)充關(guān)系： what is more; besides, moreover, apart from;

in addition, as well as；not only…but(also), meanwhile, in the meantime, some...some…others

表示轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：but, however, although, though, yet, while

on one hand…on the other hand ...,

表示因果關(guān)系：because, as, therefore, as a result, as a consequence, consequently, thus

連句成文，運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯釉~進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，使句與句之間邏輯性更強(qiáng)、

段與段之間結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。