Question

10．假如你是李華，你的好友王菲給你來信說，她的父母最近總是吵架，為此她很苦惱，問你該怎么辦，希望你能給她提一些建議．
請你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)提示，給她寫封回信．
1．等你的父母冷靜下來以后，分別找他們好好談?wù)劊?br />2．跟你的父母說，你非常愛他們；
3．向你的父母許諾，你會好好學(xué)習(xí)，不會讓他們失望的；
4．拿出你父母的以前的照片，讓他們回想往日的幸福時(shí)光．
詞數(shù)：100左右．
Dear Wang Fei，
I am very sorry to have learned that
                                                                       
Best wishes．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息寫封回信，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：等你的父母冷靜下來以后，分別找他們好好談?wù)�；跟你的父母說，你非常愛他們；向你的父母許諾，你會好好學(xué)習(xí)，不會讓他們失望的；拿出你父母的以前的照片，讓他們回想往日的幸福時(shí)光．
 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：at present目前，現(xiàn)在；calm down平靜下來；Last but not least最后同樣最重要；
I can fully understand your present feelings，for I had such experience two years ago．（高分句型一）
Third，it would be a good idea if you promise them that you will study hard and that you won't let them down．（高分句型二）
On seeing these photos，they will think of all the happy days they spent together．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Wang Fei，
     I am sorry to have learned that your parents are always quarrelling with each other at present．I can fully understand your present feelings，for I had such experience two years ago．（高分句型一）Now let me give you several suggestions．
     First，you can have a heart-to-heart talk with one parent at a time after they calm down．Second，you should tell them that you love them very much．Third，it would be a good idea if you promise them that you will study hard and that you won't let them down．（高分句型二）Last but not least，why not try to show them their old photos？On seeing these photos，they will think of all the happy days they spent together．（高分句型三）Maybe they will forgive and forget．
     I hope you will find these suggestions helpful．
     Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                      Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．