Question

14．假定你是李華，最近收到了你的英國朋友Jacob的來信，得知他已經(jīng)考上了一所名牌大學．請你寫信向他表示祝賀，并就你在大學專業(yè)選擇上遇到的困惑征求他的意見．信的內(nèi)容包括：
1向 Jacob 表示祝賀；
2談談你在大學專業(yè)選擇上的困惑；
3向?qū)Ψ秸髑笠庖姾徒ㄗh．
注意：1詞數(shù) 100 左右；
2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Jacob，
Having heard from you，I'm writing to extend my warm congratulations to you，because you have been admitted to a famous University．（高分句型一）
As for me，I suffer from confusion when choosing my major．Initially，what I'm concerned about lies in whether the major will be suitable for me．Additionally，I prefer the one that is beneficial to my career prospects，instead of so-called popular major．（高分句型二）
To avoid making my decision blindly，I expect you to recommend some practical proposals to me，including analyzing the advantages and disadvantages of a certain profession．（高分句型三）I would appreciate it if you can do me a favor．
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇寫作屬于書信類--求助信，要求考生掌握書信的格式，并有良好的語言運用能力和補充 細節(jié)能力．注意在寫作過程中明確地分段使文章具備合理的邏輯關系，包含所給要點信息，即表達謝意，面臨問題，尋求幫助．如果想達到 21-25分一檔作文的標準，必須豐富語法結構，盡可能使用高級詞匯．
【范文精講】
開頭兩句寫表達祝賀及原因，使用了 Having  heard  from  非謂語作狀語，because  引導的原因狀從兩種高級語法，
extend（表達），be admitted to（被錄取）兩個高級詞匯．
正文第一部分交代了面臨的問題，重點在于補充的內(nèi)容．使用了 when choosing my major 狀從省略，what I'm concerned about lies in whether the major will be suitable for me．主語從句加表語從句，the one which is beneficial to my career prospects 定語從句三種高級語法，陳列事例時用 initially 和 additionally 替換了老套的 firstly，secondly．詞匯方 面使用了 suffer from，confusion，be concerned about，lie in，be suitable for，be beneficial to，prospect．
正文第二部分側重征求意見，使用了不定式作狀語 to avoid，if 引導的條件狀語從句以及 blindly，recommend，practical proposals 等高級詞匯．
結尾為常規(guī)類書信企盼回復．

解答 Dear Jacob，
      Having heard from you，I'm writing to extend my warm congratulations to you，because you have been admitted to a famous University．（高分句型一）
      As for me，I suffer from confusion when choosing my major．Initially，what I'm concerned about lies in whether the major will be suitable for me．Additionally，I prefer the one that is beneficial to my career prospects，instead of so-called popular major．（高分句型二）
      To avoid making my decision blindly，I expect you to recommend some practical proposals to me，including analyzing the advantages and disadvantages of a certain profession．（高分句型三）I would appreciate it if you can do me a favor．
      Looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Hua．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．