Question

19．假定你是李華，你的外教Mr．Frank回國(guó)前向你推薦了American School Life網(wǎng)站，希望你借此提高英語(yǔ)水平．請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，告訴他你的收獲，要點(diǎn)如下：
1 表達(dá)思念；
2 上網(wǎng)收獲；
3 表示感激．
注意：1 詞數(shù)100詞左右；
2 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；
3 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Mr．Frank，
It's a fairly long time since you left our school．I miss you very much．Is everything going well？
The website you've recommended to me is very beneficial to my English study．（高分句型一）It has abundant reading materials that I need most，greatly broadening my horizon．（高分句型二）Now I has become more interested in English．Besides，I've made many new friends and we communicate a lot about school life，cultures，science，and so on．Now I can express myself much better than ever．
Thanks to your kindness and consideration，I've made rapid progress in English study．（高分句型三）I owe all my achievements to you．I'm looking forward to more advice from you!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇應(yīng)用文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)．動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題．本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化．平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：be beneficial to對(duì)…有益；broaden my horizon拓展了我的視野； become   interested in對(duì)…感興趣；Besides另外；Thanks to幸虧，由于；look  forward to 盼望；
The website you've recommended to me is very beneficial to my English study．（高分句型一）
It has abundant reading materials that I need most，greatly broadening my horizon．（高分句型二）
  Thanks to your kindness and consideration，I've made rapid progress in English study．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mr．Frank，
      It's a fairly long time since you left our school．I miss you very much．Is everything going well？
      The website you've recommended to me is very beneficial to my English study．（高分句型一）It has abundant reading materials that I need most，greatly broadening my horizon．（高分句型二）Now I has become more interested in English．Besides，I've made many new friends and we communicate a lot about school life，cultures，science，and so on．Now I can express myself much better than ever．
     Thanks to your kindness and consideration，I've made rapid progress in English study．（高分句型三）I owe all my achievements to you．I'm looking forward to more advice from you!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) （一）表達(dá)慰問(wèn)：好久不見(jiàn)，近來(lái)可好？
常用句式：
It's a fairly long time since …自從…已經(jīng)有很長(zhǎng)一段時(shí)間
Leave someplace            離開(kāi)某地  
成句：It's a fairly long time since you left our school．
補(bǔ)充：
1）我非常想念您．
I miss you very much．
2）表示問(wèn)候．
Is everything going well？
（二）感謝原因一：你給我推薦的網(wǎng)站對(duì)我?guī)椭�很大�?br />有用句式：
sth．is beneficial to      …很有用
recommend             推薦
成句：The website you've recommended to me is very beneficial to my English study．
補(bǔ)充：
網(wǎng)站上有很豐富的閱讀材料，極大地開(kāi)闊了我的眼界．
abundant  豐富的
greatly 極大地
broaden one's horizon 開(kāi)闊眼界
成句：It has abundant reading materials that I need most，greatly broadening my horizon．
    現(xiàn)狀：
現(xiàn)在我對(duì)英語(yǔ)更有興趣了．
be interested in對(duì)…..有興趣
成句：
Now I has become more interested in English．
感謝原因二：我還交了很多新朋友，還談了很多關(guān)于學(xué)校生活和文化科學(xué)的內(nèi)容．
Besides/what's more/Also此外（表過(guò)渡）
Make many new friends交到很多新朋友
補(bǔ)充：
communicate a lot  談?wù)摿撕芏?br />句子整合：Besides，I've made many new friends and we communicate a lot about school life，cultures，science，and so on．
     現(xiàn)狀：
現(xiàn)在我能更好地表達(dá)自己．
Now I can express myself much better than ever．
（四）重申感謝：多虧了您的關(guān)心，我在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)上取得很大進(jìn)步．
Thanks to    多虧
Kindness and consideration   關(guān)心
Make rapid progress  取得很大進(jìn)步
成句：
Thanks to your kindness and consideration，I've made rapid progress in English study．
補(bǔ)充：
Owe to…歸功于
Look forward to…
成句：
I owe all my achievements to you．I'm looking forward to more advice from you!
我現(xiàn)在取得的成績(jī)?nèi)�仰�?lài)您，期待您能給我更多的建議．