【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。
修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意:1)每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2)只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。
The first monthly exam which I took as a high school student held at the end of September. Unluckily, I performed poorly in mathematics and chemistry, all of which used to be my strong subject. As a result of, my total test score fell greatly and ranked 400th in our grade. I feel upset and my mother suggested I spend some time in my hobby—fishing for relaxation. Driving by my mother's suggestion, I went to a pond on a weekend. There I fished for a whole day but calmed myself down. The joy from fishing successful pushed me out off low spirits.

【答案】①which 改為that;

②在held前面加上was;

③all改為both;

④subject 改為subjects;

⑤去掉of;

⑥feel改為felt;

⑦in 改為on;

⑧Driving 改為Driven;

⑨but改為and;

⑩successful 改為successfully.


【解析】①which 改為that。

考查定語從句。The first monthly exam which I took as a high school student∧ held at the end of September。本句中The first monthly exam 是先行詞,在定語從句中作I took 的賓語,但先行詞被序數(shù)詞the first修飾。根據(jù)定語從句中如果先行詞被序數(shù)詞修飾,關(guān)系代詞只能用that,不能用which。故which改為that。

②在held前面加上was。

考查被動語態(tài)。我作為一個高中生的第一次月考,在九月底舉行。主語是the first monthly exam,與舉行hold 是被動關(guān)系。故要用被動語態(tài)。因為這是主句的謂語動詞,不是非謂語,故要加上was,構(gòu)成 was held 。

③all改為both。

考查代詞。不幸的是我的數(shù)學(xué)和化學(xué)成績不好,這兩項以前都是我的強項。先行詞是數(shù)學(xué)和化學(xué),在從句中作of 的賓語。兩者要用both,三者或三者以上的“都”要用all。故要把all改為both。

④subject 改為subjects。

考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。兩門功課是復(fù)數(shù),故要用復(fù)數(shù),即加S。。

⑤去掉of。

考察固定搭配。因此,我考試成績的總分大大下降,在我們的年級中排名第四百。as a result,因此,結(jié)果是;as a result of …由于,作為……結(jié)果,因為。而且Of 后面必須有賓語。故去掉of。

⑥feel改為felt。

考查時態(tài)。我(那時)感到非常傷心。整篇文章講的是過去的事,用的是一般過去時。故把feel 改為felt。

⑦in 改為on。

考查固定搭配。spend some time/money in doing sth.或spend some time/money on sth.故要把in改為on. Spend some time on my hobby-fishing for relaxation。

⑧Driving 改為Driven。

考查非謂語。Driving by my mother's suggestion, I went to a pond on a weekend.此句中。Drive 的邏輯主語是I,這兩者之間是被動關(guān)系,故要用過去分詞作狀語。在我母親的建議(驅(qū)使)下。我周末去了一個池塘。我是被驅(qū)使,故把driving 改為driven。

⑨but改為and。

考查連詞。我在那里釣了一整天,而且我也平靜下來。句子前后不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,而是并列關(guān)系。故but 改為and。

⑩successful 改為successfully。

考查副詞。成功捕魚的喜悅使我走出心情低落。Successfully用于修飾動詞,不能用形容詞。

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