12．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：（1）每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
（2）只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
I'm writing this e-mail to ask you for help．As an English song lover，I have a strong desire to taking part in the English song contest to be held in next month．The song I've decided to sing was Skyfall．To sing this song better，I am wondering if you could tell me anything about the background informations of the song．What's more important，could you spend some time listening to the song and giving myself some advice？Since you're native English speaker and expert in singing，I sincere hope you can give me a hand．
I would appreciate it whether you could send me a reply at your earliest convenient．Thank you in advance．

分析 本文主要講述作者向一位英語專家寫信求助，希望對方告訴Skyfall這首歌的有關背景知識，并希望對方抽點時間聽作者唱這首歌，提出一些建議．

解答 I'm writing this e-mail to ask you for help．As an English song lover，I have a strong desire to taking part in the English song contest to be held in next month．The song I've decided to sing was Skyfall．To sing this song better，I am wondering if you could tell me anything about the background informations of the song．What's more important，could you spend some time listening to the song and giving myself some advice？Since you're∧native English speaker and expert in singing，I sincere hope you can give me a hand．
I would appreciate it whether you could send me a reply at your earliest convenient．Thank you in advance．
詳解：
1．taking改為take  考查動詞不定式．此處動詞不定式短語作desire的后置定語．
2．去掉in 考查介詞．next month作時間狀語時，其前不加介詞．
3．was改為is 考查動詞時態(tài)．此處談論的是現(xiàn)在的事情，要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．
4．a(chǎn)nything改為something 考查代詞．a(chǎn)nything用于否定句或疑問句，something用于肯定句，此處是肯定句，用something． 
5．informations改為information 考查名詞．information是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復數(shù)形式．
6．myself改為me 考查代詞．give sb．sth．意為"給某人某物"，用賓語代詞me．
7．加a 考查冠詞．speaker是可數(shù)名詞，單數(shù)形式前加不定冠詡a表示泛指．
8．sincere改為sincerely 考查副詞．hope是動詞，要用副詞修飾．
9．whether改為if 考查連詞．would appreciate it if…是一個句型，意為"…將不勝感激"，是固定搭配．
10．convenient改為convenience 考查名詞．a(chǎn)t one's convenience意為"在方便的時候，在適宜的地方"，是固定搭配．

點評 高考短文改錯題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強的實用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學生的實際，從表面上看類似一篇學生習作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時把一些容易的錯誤先改好，再進行逐句改錯．其次，要進行逐個句子的改錯．這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．

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