假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Playing the violin was once one of my dream．Because of lack of practice and playing skills，I did it very bad in the beginning and was often laughing at by other students．Gradually，I lost confidence to myself and wanted to give up．But my teacher told me．“Nothing was easy．Struggle is a vital part of our life．”Heard that，I pushed myself harder and began making a rapid progress．Eventually，I won the first place in a violin competition．
From his experience．I’ve learned a lesson that it is struggle which leads us to success．As long as we don’t give up and learn from our mistakes，we are sure overcome whatever difficulties we’re faced with．

下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意： 1. 每句不超過兩個錯誤；
2. 每處錯誤及其修改均只限一詞；
3. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Dear Jim,
I am so exciting that you will come to China. I will free from December 18
and will have plenty of time to be together with you. I will meet you at the
airport and then you will take Bus No. 8 to my home. You worry about the weather
here in your e-mail. In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your
city. It isn’t very cold, but you needn’t bring many clothes with you. During
your stay at here, I’ll take you to some places of interests and you can taste
some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly fun together.
I am looking forward to meet you soon.
Yours,
John

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：把缺詞處叫個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
As a child I dreamed of become a movie star, while my best friend Jim wants to be a director. One day he asked me that I wanted to star in a movie he was making. It based on the story of another friend of ours, Kate. She once gets lost in a forest, but managed to find his way home. It was an interesting story, so the movie never got off the ground because of we didn’t even have a camera. In fact, we just wanted to playing games in the forest. However, it is one of the most unforgettable childhood memory I have.

英語課上，老師要求同桌同學(xué)相互修改作文。假設(shè)以下短文為你同桌所寫，請你對其進(jìn)行修改。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/\），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

假如英語課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的一篇作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤， 要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不記分。
Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both sad and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫得以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。
增加： 在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（ ∧ ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改： 在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意： 1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2． 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。
Under the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult work. Just clicking your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished. You needn't step out the room. It seems easy and quick. And there's always a trap online. If you are careless, it will bring you trouble. You may find the color of the article is different from that you want, or the size is either too small nor too big. If you want to be different, you'd better not to buy clothes online. Once you put up the clothes you bought online and go out, you will find many people in the street wearing the same clothes like you.

Dear Editor,
I’m the only daughter of my parents. So they worried about everything I do. For example,
when I ride my bike, my parents won’t let me to ride by myself. They are afraid I might          
fall off  my bike and hurt myself. They are taking great trouble to support a bike, with
my mother even carried a first-aid box. I’m not free to ride and I often say angry, “Why not
let me ride alone?”Now, most family have one child. Parents want to do everything       
for his children. This does no good on them. Too many love from parents may prevent
children from independent. In my opinion, parents should let their children do that they
should do alone.           

假如英語課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號( ∧), 并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（ ＼）劃掉。
修改： 在錯的詞下劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意:：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2、只允許修改10處, 多者(從第11處起) 不計分。
Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the zoo with Lily. There was lots of people there. I found a girl cry in the zoo. She was lost and she can’t find her mother. We decided to help her. I try my best find the broadcasting station in the zoo. On the same time Lily played with her and looked after her careful there. The little girl stopped crying and played with Lily. At last his mother came. That made me feel very happily. I thought I really did a good thing. If everyone helps with each other, the world will become more beautiful.

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換批改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中至多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，在下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在下面寫出改正后的詞。
注意：
每次錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞
只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
I’d like to say anything about the service in our school dining hall. In general,the service is satisfied. The hall is clean and tidy. And﹀ dishes look inviting and tastes good. What’s more, the workers there treat us as their friends, which makes us real happy. However, the cost of the meals was a little high. Also, we have only a limited variety of dish which are the same every day. In addition, we often have to stand with line for a long time after we get our food. This wastes a lot of time. I hope something can be done to solve about these problems soon.

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧）,并在其下面寫上該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
【小題1】When cross the street, he was knocked down by a car. 
【小題2】I would be grateful for you if you give me some advice.
【小題3】We requested him put an end to his speech.
【小題4】After school, the students went straightly home.
【小題5】My money has been given out.
【小題6】She gave me a determination look—the kind that said she would never change her mind.
【小題7】Buried himself in his research, he didn’t notice the stranger come in.
【小題8】The earthquake caused great damages to the city.
【小題9】The selfless doctor devoted his time to rescue the injured.
【小題10】He broke the law, but he successfully escaped from being punished.