Question

假如英語課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的一篇作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤， 要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不記分。
Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both sad and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.

Answer 1

【小題1】加上for
【小題2】past → passed
【小題3】feet → foot
【小題4】when → than
【小題5】a → the
【小題6】other → another
【小題7】do → did
【小題8】possible → possibly
【小題9】去掉it
【小題10】lose → losing

解析試題分析：
【小題1】Once I waited ∧ a bus to come… 加上for. (wait for sb. to do sth. 等候某人做某事)
【小題2】30 minutes past，改為passed. (past: 介詞；passed: 動詞pass的過去式)
【小題3】I decided to walk on feet. 改為foot. (on foot, 固定搭配。)
【小題4】But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. 改為than. (no sooner…than為固定句式)
【小題5】If I chose to take a next bus. 改為the. （the next bus, 下班車）
【小題6】I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. 改為another. (another 30 minutes =" 30" minutes more. 再等30分鐘)
【小題7】Only then do I realize my problem. 改為did. (then表示的是過去時間)
【小題8】Being impatient will possible waste… 改為possibly. (修飾動詞應(yīng)使用副詞)
【小題9】…waste all the effort that we have put it in. 去掉it. (定語從句中put的賓語是關(guān)系代詞that)
【小題10】Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, 改為losing. (be close to doing sth. to是介詞)
考點(diǎn)：短文改錯。