文中共有10處語言錯誤，錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在此處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出修改的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從十一處起）不計分。

Dear sir,

　　    I'm glad to recommend (推薦) my friend Li Ming to you. Li Ming was born in July 15, 1974 in Beijing. He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986 .When he was in the middle school, he did good in maths, physics and chemistry and fond of art. After graduating from No. 4 High School, he entered Beijing University study physics. After four year of hard work there, he went to the United States for further study. Because of his excellent work, he get a doctor's degree in physics in last year. He is now in good health but would like to make contributions to our country．I will be most gratefully if you consider my recommendation．

　　    Looking forward to receive your early reply!

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　              Yours truly,

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　               Wang Lin

文中共有10處語言錯誤，錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在此處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出修改的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從十一處起）不計分。
Dear sir,
　　    I'm glad to recommend (推薦) my friend Li Ming to you. Li Ming was born in July 15, 1974 in Beijing. He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986 .When he was in the middle school, he did good in maths, physics and chemistry and fond of art. After graduating from No. 4 High School, he entered Beijing University study physics. After four year of hard work there, he went to the United States for further study. Because of his excellent work, he get a doctor's degree in physics in last year. He is now in good health but would like to make contributions to our country．I will be most gratefully if you consider my recommendation．
　　    Looking forward to receive your early reply!
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　              Yours truly,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　              Wang Lin

文中共有10處語言錯誤，錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪減或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（︿），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下面畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
How a great party! I seldom go to parties because it’s such a problem to me to remember people names. I’m so glad I’ve read that book about improving your memory. The author suggest do exercises, and they really help. I don’t worry about what people would think me any more, and I try to pay attention to that people are saying. As result, I have a great time! I’m even planning to go on dancing with my friends. I will have an English test tomorrow, so I could stop writing now and start studying.

文中共有10處語言錯誤，錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/\）,并在該句下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Our English club was set up two months ago．Now，we have members of 25．We met once a week on Saturday afternoon．So far，we have been conducted a variety of activities on English learning，such as watching English films，including a Christmas party and get together with the foreign students．Last week we held an English story－telling competition．We required that the entries would be original and interesting and be presented in English within five minutes．Every member took an actively part in it．Two foreign English teachers were invited to act as judge．At last，LiBing won the first place．Many members said that the activity benefited them many ways．
Not only did it improve their speaking English，but also it brought them more fun．They hope many such activities can be held．

文中共有10處語言錯誤，錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/\）,并在該句下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
My bike was stolen outside of shop. That day I went into the shop near my home to buy an exercise books, forgetting to lock. When I came out of the shop, the bike had lost. At first, I didn’t know how to do. I could hardly believe it, because I had been in the shop only 3 and 4 minutes. Then I searched all the streets nearby, and could not find it out, so I went to the police station and reported the loss. The followed day, with a friend of mine, I went to the cinema. When I came out I found my own bike place near my friend’s.

文中共有10處語言錯誤，錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/\）,并在該句下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Li Hua won the first place in our city in this year College Entrance Exam. And she has admitted by Peking University. As a good friend of hers, I’d like to talk about her study in the senior school. First of all, she was very confident and studies very hard. She was determined to go to Peking University but she was sure she could manage. What’s more, she had a carefully plan about what to do every day. She had formed a good habit of studying. For an example, she never put off all what she should do today till tomorrow and seldom did she stay up later at night. She also pleased to help others, as a result of that, all the teachers and students liked her.

文中共有10處語言錯誤，錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/\）,并在該句下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties．The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese．My teacher advised me to keep diaries．I followed her advices．Happily it worked．Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a short story and showed to my teacher．She liked it very much that she read it to the class．Everyone said the story was the good one, I was great encouraged by their words．

文中共有10處語言錯誤，錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/\）,并在該句下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

My bike was stolen outside of shop. That day I went into the shop near my home to buy an exercise books, forgetting to lock. When I came out of the shop, the bike had lost. At first, I didn’t know how to do. I could hardly believe it, because I had been in the shop only 3 and 4 minutes. Then I searched all the streets nearby, and could not find it out, so I went to the police station and reported the loss. The followed day, with a friend of mine, I went to the cinema. When I came out I found my own bike place near my friend’s.

文中共有10處語言錯誤，錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/\）,并在該句下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties．The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese．My teacher advised me to keep diaries．I followed her advices．Happily it worked．Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a short story and showed to my teacher．She liked it very much that she read it to the class．Everyone said the story was the good one, I was great encouraged by their words．

文中共有10處語言錯誤，錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/\）,并在該句下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Li Hua won the first place in our city in this year College Entrance Exam. And she has admitted by Peking University. As a good friend of hers, I’d like to talk about her study in the senior school. First of all, she was very confident and studies very hard. She was determined to go to Peking University but she was sure she could manage. What’s more, she had a carefully plan about what to do every day. She had formed a good habit of studying. For an example, she never put off all what she should do today till tomorrow and seldom did she stay up later at night. She also pleased to help others, as a result of that, all the teachers and students liked her.