Question

【題目】Writing.

Imagine you are having a party. What kind of party is it? Who is at the party? What are people doing at the moment? Please write a short passage within 60 words.

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Answer 1

【答案】Today is my birthday. I am having a party at my home. My parents make a lot of dishes. I invite many friends to my party. Look! Amy is playing the piano. She plays very well. Tom and Paul are playing cards. There is a big cake on the table. Mary, Hellen and Jack are eating the cake. It is very delicious. Where is Brian? Oh, here he is. He is dancing with Alice. We are happy at the party.

【解析】

這篇作文要求我們描寫一次聚會(huì)。題目中列出了幾個(gè)問題，利用這些問題來組織語言，豐富細(xì)節(jié)，串聯(lián)成文。審題可知，短文中應(yīng)包括以下幾個(gè)內(nèi)容：首先介紹這是一個(gè)什么聚會(huì)；然后是聚會(huì)上都有誰；重點(diǎn)是介紹人們?cè)诟墒裁�。短文敘述的是正在發(fā)生的事情，因此文章應(yīng)以現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)為主來敘述，其構(gòu)成是am/is/are+動(dòng)詞的現(xiàn)在分詞，注意根據(jù)主語的人稱和單復(fù)數(shù)形式，選擇適當(dāng)?shù)?/span>be動(dòng)詞形式，并注意動(dòng)詞現(xiàn)在分詞形式的變化。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語句式結(jié)構(gòu)和漢語的不同，不能根據(jù)漢語思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用較常見的主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，句式簡潔，敘述清晰、明了。也可以使用and，but，so等連接的并列句結(jié)構(gòu)，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏。