Question

【題目】【2016江蘇泰州】書面表達

今年是地級泰州市成立二十周年，你們學校正在參與“文明泰州人”的討論，

請你根據下表提示，用英語寫一篇短文，談談如何做一個文明的中學生。

地點	內容
在家里	對父母有禮貌，多做家務活，……
在學校	尊敬老師，與同學友好相處，勤奮學習，……
在公共場合	遵守交通規(guī)則，排隊等候，不亂扔垃圾，……

要求：

1．詞數100左右。開頭及結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

2．所寫內容必須包括表格中所有的信息，并作適當的發(fā)揮。

3．不得出現真實的人名、校名、地名等相關信息。。

參考詞匯：文明的civilized

It is 20 years since the City of Taizhou was set up. Our city has become richer and people feel happier. Recently， all of us are talking about how to be civilized students in our school.

In my opinion，_____________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________

Let's join together to be civilized students!

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

It is 20 years since the City of Taizhou was set up. Our city has become richer and people feel happier. Recently， all of us are talking about how to be civilized students in our .school.

In my opinion， we should be polite to our parents and help-them do more housework at home. At school， we should respect our teachers， get on well with our classmates and study hard. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red， we should stop. When we wait for a bus， we should wait in line. Don't throw litter or spit in public. And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need.

If everyone behaves well， our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.

Let's join together to be civilized students!

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇表格作文。通過審題可知需要些的主要內容通過表格幾乎都給出了：在家里，在學校，在公共場所的表現。我要做的就是運用正確的語言把他們表達出來。在每個要點中注意內容的適當發(fā)揮，寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

寫作亮點：這篇短文內容切題，意思連貫，表達清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運用恰當，多見好句型和習慣表達用語。如：get on well with，When the traffic lights are red， we should stop.，And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. If everyone behaves well， our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.等。這些使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。