Question

【題目】【2016江蘇徐州】書面表達(dá)

王平現(xiàn)在美國(guó)上學(xué)。今天他將外出一天。請(qǐng)你以王平的名義給房東Mrs Black 寫一張留言條， 要點(diǎn)如下：

計(jì)劃	內(nèi)容
上午去圖書館	（1）還書 （2）……
下午跟朋友去公園	（1）……(2) 回來(lái)路上順便幫Mrs Black買…
晚上六點(diǎn)前回家	晚飯想吃…….
另：Mrs Black的女兒Helen 一大早來(lái)電話，說(shuō)……,請(qǐng)盡快回電

注意： 1. 詞數(shù)90 左右。 留言條已給出的部分（見答題卡）不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2. 不要逐字翻譯。 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)， 使行文連貫。

3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Mrs Black,

I am having a day out today. In the morning I will go to the library to return the books.Then I will look for some information for my report. In the afternoon I will go to the park with my friends. We plan to go boating and climb the hill there. On my way back I’ll buy some milk as you said yesterday we don’t have any at home. I’ll be back home by six p.m. Would you please cook some fish for me? I love fish very much.

Early this morning, your daughter Helen called, saying that she had something important to talk to you. Please call her back as soon as possible.

Wang Ping

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹王平給房東Mrs Black 寫一張留言條，介紹自己的計(jì)劃。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般將來(lái)時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I will go to ...；We plan to ...；I’ll be ...；your daughter Helen called, saying that ...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系.

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我要外出一天，接下來(lái)介紹我的計(jì)劃：去圖書館，去公園，回家；最后讓Mrs Black給她的女兒Helen會(huì)電話。此處look for,plan to,go boating, on one’s way back, would you please...?talk to sb, as soon as possible等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。