Question

【題目】書面表達。

南京市政網(wǎng)上貼出了一張海報，評選幸福指數(shù)最高的社區(qū)。請閱讀海報內(nèi)容，寫一份推薦信，介紹你所在的社區(qū)。

注意：

1．文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和學校名稱；

2．語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；

3．詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear sir：

I would like to recommend my neighbourhood to be the happiest one in Nanjing.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear sir：

I would like to recommend my neighbourhood to be the happiest one in Nanjing. Our neighbourhood is clean， beautiful， civilized and harmonious. Our neighbours are friendly， kind and helpful. If somebody is in need， we will give a hand to him. We get along well with each other. When we meet each other， we will always say hello to one another. There are some activities in our community all the year around， like playing balls， Square dance， playing chess， the singing contest and so on. I often play basketball. I love my neighbourhood. We live happily in the community.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文給出了提示，我們要根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容進行寫作，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮，句子要正確，要注意時態(tài)、主謂一致等問題。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和學校名稱； 語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范； 詞數(shù)80左右。

寫作亮點：這篇是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文，字數(shù)符合要求，語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范。文中使用了一些固定句式及短語We get along well with each other. If somebody is in need， we will give a hand to him.等，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。