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8．在貴州一些偏遠(yuǎn)山區(qū)，許多學(xué)生住得離學(xué)校較遠(yuǎn)，每天上學(xué)要步行1個多小時，因為家里貧窮，中午他們只能吃從家里帶的冷飲和冷菜，有的已經(jīng)變壞了．一些學(xué)生甚至一天只吃早、晚兩頓，沒吃中飯，下午就餓著上課．
請以"You and me"為題寫一篇英語短文，介紹他們的狀況并談?wù)勀愕母惺芎痛蛩悖?br />要求：
（1）可根據(jù)需要對所給材料進(jìn)行取舍或適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不必逐字翻譯；
（2）短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、地名和校名；
（3）詞數(shù)80～～110左右．
You and me
You live in a mountain village．It's far away from your school．It takes you one hour to get there every day．To save money，you bring food for lunch．At noon，it is cold，some even goes bad．Sometimes you study the whole afternoon without lunch，only two meals one day．
I never worry about my life．Every day I study in a bright room and enjoy each delicious meal!What different lives we are living!As a teenager，surely I should do something for you like raising money，collecting books，etc．In the future，I want to be a volunteer to help you．
We are living under the same sky and let's share the same happiness!．

Answer 1

分析 本題是一篇給定話題的書面表達(dá)，寫作的話題為你和我，具體內(nèi)容為介紹貴州偏遠(yuǎn)山區(qū)學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況，以及提出個人的感受和個人的未來打算．在寫作時應(yīng)注意符合題意，同時應(yīng)注重符合實際和語言的準(zhǔn)確性．根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容，本文的時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第二和第一人稱．用到的主要句型及詞匯有：It takes sb some time to do sth，go bad，never，sometimes，be far away from，worry about，I should…，let's share…等．

解答 You and me
You live in a mountain village．It's far away from your school．It takes you one hour to get there every day．To save money，you bring food for lunch．At noon，it is cold，some even goes bad．Sometimes you study the whole afternoon without lunch，only two meals one day．
I never worry about my life．Every day I study in a bright room and enjoy each delicious meal!What different lives we are living!As a teenager，surely I should do something for you like raising money，collecting books，etc．In the future，I want to be a volunteer to help you．
We are living under the same sky and let's share the same happiness!

點評 這是一篇給材料作文．動筆前一定要審好題，這是寫好作文的前提和關(guān)鍵，不跑題，把握好大的時態(tài)和人稱，把握好文章的主次．行文中要注意語句的連貫，句式要豐富一些，避免成為流水賬似的文章，同時不要受漢語思維的影響，要用地道的英語表達(dá)出來．注意時態(tài)及語法的正確，盡量避免一些不必要的錯誤，以免影響分?jǐn)?shù)．