Question

3．某英語雜志社舉辦以"科學(xué)飲食，健康生活"為主題的英語征文比賽．請你根據(jù)下表所列的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，以"The healthier，the happier"為題寫一篇英語短文，介紹自己的生活方式，參加比賽．
要求：
（1）詞數(shù)100個(gè)左右；
（2）條理清晰，語義連貫，句式規(guī)范，字跡工整；
（3）不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息．

以前的生活方式	如今的生活方式		感悟
	內(nèi)容	對健康的影響
不吃早飯，吃太多的快餐，看太多的電視，過多地玩電腦游戲…	飲食	至少兩點(diǎn)	至少一點(diǎn)
	睡眠
	鍛煉
	心理健康（傾訴、放松）

The healthier，the happier
In the past，Iseldom had breakfast．Instead，I ate too much fast food．I watched TV and played computer games so much that they had a bad
effect on my health．This made me feel uncomfortable from time to time．

But now Ihave changed a lot．I have a healthy diet，and it provides me with enough energy．I eat more fruit and vegetables instead of meat and sweets，and it keeps me healthy．I get up early and go to bedearly．Because I have enough sleep，I feel active and energetic all day．Every day I do exercise for half an hour．I usually play basketball after school，which makes me strong．It makes me relaxed and happy．When I have problems with my study，I talk to my friends and ask my teachers or parents for help．
And it makes me feel less stressed and feel relaxed．/When something worries me，I often talk with others instead of keeping it to myself．

I thinkhaving a healthy life style is important for me．If I am healthier，I will be happier．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱加圖表的作文，線索很明顯，分成了三段，當(dāng)描述以前的生活方式的時(shí)候，該部分時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí)．描述如今的生活方式時(shí)，該部分時(shí)態(tài)可為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)或現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)．寫自己的感悟時(shí)，該部分時(shí)態(tài)可為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、一般將來時(shí)，感悟的內(nèi)容需要補(bǔ)充．人稱用第一人稱來寫．

解答 The healthier，the happier
In the past，I seldom had breakfast．Instead，I ate too much fast food．I watched TV and played computer games so much that they had a bad effect on my health．This made me feeluncomfortable from time to time．
But now I have changed a lot．I have a healthy diet，and it provides me with enoughenergy．I eat more fruit and vegetables instead of meat and sweets，and it keeps me healthy．I get up early and go to bed early．Because I have enough sleep，I feel active and energetic all day．Every day I do exercise for half an hour．I usually play basketball after school，which makes me strong．It makes me relaxed and happy．When I have problems with my study，I talk to my friends and ask my teachers or  parents for help．And it makes me feel less stressed and feel relaxed．When something worries me，I often talk with others instead of keeping it to myself．
I think having a healthy lifestyle is important for me．If I am healthier，I will be happier．

點(diǎn)評 這是一篇給材料作文，短文的結(jié)構(gòu)很明顯，已經(jīng)給出．動(dòng)筆前先要圍繞這些要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容，注意將這些要點(diǎn)全部表達(dá)出來，不要偏離文章中心．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系．