Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

目前，越來越多的中學(xué)生在周末上各種各樣的培訓(xùn)班或請(qǐng)家教。針對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象，人們普遍存在兩者不同的觀點(diǎn)，詳見下表：

有必要	沒必要
1.跟老師學(xué)比自己學(xué)好； 2.可以鞏固課堂所學(xué)的內(nèi)容； 3.可以學(xué)到更多東西。	1.容易養(yǎng)成依賴習(xí)慣； 2.學(xué)生需要時(shí)間休息； 3.許多培訓(xùn)班和家教一盈利為目的。

請(qǐng)以“Is Training Class or a Private Teacher Necessary”為題，寫一篇70詞以上的短文。

要求：1.反映上面表格中的內(nèi)容；2.簡(jiǎn)要闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。

文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

提示詞：有效的effective 依賴的dependent

Is Training Class or a Private Teacher Necessary

These days， more and more middle school students are taking all kinds of training classes or having private teachers at weekends.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Is Training Class or a Private Teacher Necessary

These days， more and more middle school students are taking all kinds of training classes or having private teachers at weekends. There are two different opinions about it.

Some think it necessary. First， it’s more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves. Second， it can help them to learn the old lessons well. Third， they can learn a lot more.

Others think it unnecessary. They think students can easily become dependent on it， and the students need time to relax. Beside， many training classes and private teachers only think about making money.

In my opinion， if you are really bad at or interested in a certain subject maybe it’s OK for you. If not， it’s unnecessary.

【解析】

試題分析：本文題型是考生非常熟悉的正反觀點(diǎn)類的議論文，在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中也有相應(yīng)的模板。審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱以第三人稱為主，發(fā)表個(gè)人意見時(shí)使用第一人稱。本文的要點(diǎn)均已給出，考生需要使用合適的連接詞把孤立的要點(diǎn)聯(lián)系成文。如for one thing， for another； besides， firstly， secondly， last but not least等。也要使用一些高級(jí)的詞匯詞組如 be supposed to do sth， benefit 等以提升文章的檔次分。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文包含了所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，先是一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為有必要的觀點(diǎn)，然后是認(rèn)為沒必要的觀點(diǎn)，最后是自己的觀點(diǎn)，觀點(diǎn)明確，駕馭語(yǔ)言的能力強(qiáng)，選擇詞匯的時(shí)候要選擇相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯，運(yùn)用了多種句型，使文章更富有變化。