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12．根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上．
作為一名中學(xué)生，假如有一天你所在的地方突然發(fā)生地震，你認(rèn)為你能做些什么和不能做什么？請你以"How to keep safe when an earthquake happens？"為題寫一篇短文．
內(nèi)容包括：1．保持鎮(zhèn)定，迅速躲到安全的地方（move to a safe location）去，如堅(jiān)固的桌子下面．
2．可以用手或軟的東西保護(hù)（protect）臉和頭．
3．當(dāng)確定震動停止時(shí)盡快跑到戶外，若已在戶外，就要遠(yuǎn)離高的建筑物．
4．不要乘坐電梯．
作文要求：1．不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名．
2．語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右．
How to keep safe when an earthquake happens？
It's important for us to keep safe when an earthquake happens．We should pay attention to the following：First of all，we must keep quiet，and then move to a safe location quickly，such as under the hard tables．Second，we should protect our faces and heads with hands or other soft things．Third，when the shake stops surely，we should run out as soon as possible and try to be far away from buildings．If you are outside，remember to keep away from tall buildings．Last but not least，don't take the elevator at this moment．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是以"How to keep safe when an earthquake happens？"為題說說地震時(shí)候應(yīng)該如何應(yīng)對．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．保持鎮(zhèn)定，迅速躲到安全的地方（move to a safe location）去，如堅(jiān)固的桌子下面．
2．可以用手或軟的東西保護(hù)（protect）臉和頭．
3．當(dāng)確定震動停止時(shí)盡快跑到戶外，若已在戶外，就要遠(yuǎn)離高的建筑物．
4．不要乘坐電梯．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
pay attention to 關(guān)注
keep+adj保持怎么樣
run out跑出去
as…as possible盡可能的…
try to do sth 盡力做某事
keep away from  遠(yuǎn)離
last but not least最后也是最重要的
【高分句型】
1．①It's important for us to ②keep safe③when an earthquake happens．
①it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語．
②keep+adj保持怎么樣
③when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句．
2．Third，①when the shake stops surely，we should②run out ③as soon as possible and④try to be⑤far away from buildings
①when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句．
②run out跑出去．
③as…as possible盡可能的…
④try to do sth 盡力做某事
⑤far away from離…遠(yuǎn)

解答 How to keep safe when an earthquake happens？
It's important for us to keep safe when an earthquake happens．【高分句型】We should pay attention to the following：First of all，we must keep quiet，and then move to a safe location quickly，such as under the hard tables．（保持鎮(zhèn)定，迅速躲到安全的地方去，如堅(jiān)固的桌子下面）Second，we should protect our faces and heads with hands or other soft things．（可以用手或軟的東西保護(hù)臉和頭）Third，when the shake stops surely，we should run out as soon as possible and try to be far away from buildings．【高分句型】If you are outside，remember to keep away from tall buildings．（當(dāng)確定震動停止時(shí)盡快跑到戶外，若已在戶外，就要遠(yuǎn)離高的建筑物）Last but not least，don't take the elevator at this moment．（不要乘坐電梯）

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