Question

Writing 4 (2015江蘇南京秦淮區(qū)一模)

    假定你是你校英語報(bào)的小記者，以下兩幅圖展現(xiàn)了發(fā)生在 劉林家的生活場景，請根據(jù)要求寫一篇英語短文投稿。

內(nèi)容要求：

1. 簡要描述兩幅圖的內(nèi)容；

2. 概述你對兩幅圖的理解；

3. 說明兩幅圖對你的啟示。

When Liu Lin was four,... Twenty years later ,...

注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

2. 語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；

3. 詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)

    It happened in Liu Lin's family. 

Answer 1

Writing 4

[寫作提示]

1. 審題：

這是一篇圖文結(jié)合的記敘文。以第三人稱客觀介紹發(fā)生在劉林 家的生活場景，以第一人稱表達(dá)你對此事的觀點(diǎn)及給你的啟示。主體 時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

2. 確定要點(diǎn)：

(1) 簡要描述兩幅圖的內(nèi)容：

① 20年前，劉林4歲時(shí)媽媽為他洗腳；

② 20年后，劉林為他媽媽洗腳。

(2) 概述你對兩幅圖的理解：

① 父母把時(shí)間和精力都花在照顧孩子身上；

② 長大后我們應(yīng)懂得感恩父母。

(3) 說明兩幅圖給你的啟示。

[參考范文]

    It happened in Liu Lin;s family. Twenty years ago,when Liu Lin was four,his mother helped him wash his feet every day.Twenty years later,Liu Lin grows into a young man. Now he helps his mother to wash her feet every day.

    What do the pictures tell us? On the one hand,when we were young,our parents devoted themselves to taking care of us. On the other hand,we should always remember what our parents have done for us. When they are growing older,they need our love and care as well.Therefore,it is important for us to pay our parents back after we grow up.

    In my family,my parents also give me great love and care every day.I love my parents from the bottom of my heart.Thus,I will learn from Liu Lin to do something for my parents from now on.