Question

Writing 10(2014 浙江寧波>

    假設(shè)你是Mike ,后天是父親節(jié)，請你根據(jù)下面所給的信息， 寫一封信回憶去年夏天與父親一起爬山的難忘經(jīng)歷，作為一份 送給父親的特殊禮物。

注意:①信中應(yīng)包含所有提供的信息并展開合理的想象；

② 信中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名；

③ 詞數(shù):80左右(信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞 數(shù)) 。

Dear Daddy,

    It's a gift for Father's Day when you are reading it. 

    I still remember the day last summer when  

    Now,I want to say：I love you,Daddy.You raise me up!

    Happy Fathers Day!

                           Yours,

                            Mike

Answer 1

Writing 10

[寫作提示]

1. 本文屬于記敘、議論結(jié)合的文章，主體時態(tài)為一般過去時和一 般現(xiàn)在時；

2. 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):①去年夏天與父親一起爬山的經(jīng)歷;②自己的感受。

3. 參考詞匯：rain on the half way 半路下雨;complain 抱怨;give up

放棄;put your coat on me把你的外套給我穿上；tell me告訴我;enjoy the beauty of 享受 之美。

[參考范文]

Dear Daddy,

    It’s a gift for Fathers Day when you are reading it.

    I still remember the day last summer when we went mountain climbing together.We started early in the moming.But,unluckily,it began to rain on the half way.I got all wet through,feeling cold and tired.So I couldn’t help complaining and wanted to give up.However,you encouraged me not to give up and put your coat on me softly.You said, “We won’t see the fantastic scenery unless we reach the top." You really cheered me up.We got to the top at last and enjoyed the beauty of nature that I had never seen.

    Now,I want to say：I love you,Daddy.You raise me up!

    Happy Father's Day!

                           Yours,

                            Mike