Question

Writing 9( 2013江蘇無錫北塘區(qū))

    緊張而又忙碌的初中生活即將結(jié)束，在裝載你收獲的行囊——成長記錄袋時還應(yīng)增添一份你自己滿意的答卷。清以 “ My Unforgettable School Life”為題寫一篇文章，記錄你過去年 中難忘的校園生活，并描述你自己對將來學(xué)習(xí)生活的期望。文章應(yīng)包括以下要點(diǎn)：

具體要求：

1. 詞數(shù)80詞左右;開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2. 文中需包括所有寫作要點(diǎn)，但不要逐字翻譯，適當(dāng)加入過 渡詞句，使短文通順、連貫；

3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

        My Unforgettable School Life 

    How time flies!My colorful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.

     

Answer 1

Writing 9 [寫作提示]

1. 審題:本文屬于記敘文，主體時態(tài)為一般過去時和一般將來時。

2. 確定要點(diǎn)： .

(1) 過去三年校園生活所得；

(2) 過去三年校園生活所失；

(3) 今后的學(xué)習(xí)打算。

[參考范文]

    My Unforgettable School Life How time flies!My colorful middle school life is nearly ending.Here is what I think of about myself.

    In the past three years,I have learned a lot of knowledge.I was really grateful to our teachers for their help. I got on well with my classmates. We learned from each other. I had many interests such as reading books,drawing pictures and so on.However,I was not good at sports.Sometimes I was late for school.The teachers were very angry with me.

    In the future,I will take part in more sports and try to plan my time carefully. I'll try my best to do better.