Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

生命就像是一種回聲，你送出什么它就送回什么，你播種什么就收獲什么，你給予什么就得到什么。因此，人們常說“幫助別人就是幫助自己”。請以Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves 為題寫一篇短文。

要求：1. 思路清晰，觀點(diǎn)明確，語法正確，有說服力；

2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3. 80詞左右。

Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves

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Answer 1

【答案】Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves

Nobody is perfect enough to manage to do everything, so help is necessary and important in our life. On the one hand, we should help others often. Giving help can bring us pleasure. Helping an old man cross the road often makes me feel confident and useful. On the other hand, we need others’ help when we get into trouble. I often get help from my parents, friends, teachers, even some strangers. Thanks to their help, it is easy for me to get out of trouble.

All in all, everyone needs help. And only who are willing to help others will also be helped.

【解析】

本文屬于話題作文，主要講述“幫助別人就是幫助自己”。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如adj+enough，on the one hand，on the other hand，make sb do，get into trouble，thanks to，it is adj for sb to do sth。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。