Question

2014年春節(jié)剛剛過去，春節(jié)期間大人們常常會給小孩子壓歲錢，有人說收錢很尷尬，也沒有意義，你覺得呢？為此學(xué)校組織發(fā)起了一場討論。討論的主題是：節(jié)日送錢好還是送禮物好。請你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，寫一篇短文，介紹同學(xué)們的一些觀點，并闡述自己的觀點或建議。

支持送禮物的同學(xué)的觀點	小禮物可以帶給人驚喜 禮物有其內(nèi)在意義，重在情誼
支持送錢的同學(xué)的觀點	送錢簡單、方便 買禮物花心思又浪費時間
你的想法或建議	1、 2、

要求：
短文應(yīng)該包括表格所有要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名或校名；
文章約100個單詞。
參考詞匯： a waste of time, show love and care, convenient,
Money or presents
During the spring festival, adults often give children lucky money. Do you think it’s a good idea? Which is better, to give money or to give presents? We have a warm discussion about it.
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Answer 1

Money or presents
During the spring festival, adults often give children lucky money. Do you think it’s a good idea? Which is better, to give money or to give presents? We have a warm discussion about it.
Some students think it is better to give presents. They think small presents can give a surprise to the children. Some presents have deep meaning and can show love and care to them. But other students don’t think so. They think it is better to give money because it is convenient to do so. If we buy a present, we will spend too much attention and it is also a waste of time.
In my opinion, I think it is better to give money. In this way, children can buy what they like with the money. And they can also save the money and develop a habit of thrift.

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們把一次討論的情況報告出來，這個討論是關(guān)于春節(jié)期間，大人們是給孩子們錢更好，還是送禮物更好。不同的學(xué)生有不同的觀點，我們需要把這兩個不同的觀點表達(dá)出來，最后再發(fā)表自己的看法。所以這篇短文應(yīng)該主要分成三個部分，一是同意送禮物的同學(xué)們的觀點及原因；二是同意直接給錢的學(xué)生們的觀點和他們的理由；最后是自己的看法和理由，這一部分需要自己的發(fā)揮。寫作時要注意文章的結(jié)構(gòu)和層次。同時，注意表達(dá)的流暢和意思的連貫，多使用好的句型和短語。
【亮點說明】這是一篇很優(yōu)秀的范文。這篇短文的層次非常清楚，觀點非常鮮明，意思也很連貫。文章按照題目的要求分成了三個部分，首先是同意送禮物的學(xué)生們的觀點和理由，這里使用的句型有g(shù)ive sb. a surprise、show love and care to sb.等；其次是同意給錢的學(xué)生們的觀點，it is convenient to do so. If we buy a present, we will spend too much attention and it is also a waste of time，最后是作者自己的看法，并給出了兩個理由，children can buy what they like with the money以及develop a habit of thrift。