Question

在陽(yáng)光雨露里，我已長(zhǎng)高、長(zhǎng)壯，但這還不是全部，長(zhǎng)大還應(yīng)包括什么？是關(guān)心、幫助同學(xué)？是體貼、理解父母？是感恩、回報(bào)親朋師長(zhǎng)？還是……，成長(zhǎng)的點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴滴，久久不能忘記。請(qǐng)以I Am Not a Child Any More為題，記敘你在學(xué)習(xí)生活中經(jīng)歷的一件或兩件事，表明你已經(jīng)不再是一個(gè)下孩子。
要求：1.請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給題目，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，不少于80詞；
2.語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔；
3.文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)算    
I am not a child any more

Answer 1

I am not a child any more
I have changed a lot during the past three years. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am strong and as tall as my father. The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others.    
It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. At bedtime, I fetched hot water for my mother to wash feet. My mother said, “Dear, you are really grown up.”     
It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child any more.

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。本篇短文涉及了過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在的改變，從各個(gè)方面能感受到作者不再是一個(gè)孩子了，已經(jīng)長(zhǎng)大了可以為父母做點(diǎn)事情了。文中用到了一般過(guò)去式。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，不僅介紹了作者自己和小時(shí)候的變化，還從實(shí)際行動(dòng)中表明自己不再是一個(gè)孩子了，文中用到了一些固定句型The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others；It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child any more.這些句子給文章增色不少。