Question

2013年1月10日，18位美國大學(xué)生參觀了我校，交流了同學(xué)們的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況。我的朋友Julia作為初三（6）班的代表之一參加了這次交流活動(dòng)，收獲很大。以下是Julia和外國友人交流的一些信息。請(qǐng)你幫我整理出一篇以“My friend Julia”為題的短文。
要求：1. 短文應(yīng)包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2. 表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫。
3. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右。

Julia	1998年出生在福建，和爺爺奶奶生活在泰興。
Hobbies	①喜歡英語：�？从⒄Z雜志、電影，每天堅(jiān)持練習(xí)說英語。 ②網(wǎng)上購物：價(jià)廉物美，棉織品穿起來舒服。 ③喜歡春節(jié)：至少寫兩個(gè)理由。
School life	離校遠(yuǎn)，騎車20分鐘，在校過得非常愉快。
Lifestyle	很少鍛煉，兩餐間常吃像漢堡、糖果之類的零食。請(qǐng)給她至少兩點(diǎn)建議。
Dreams	①地球上沒有一點(diǎn)污染。學(xué)生可以在網(wǎng)上學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)。 ②想成為一名科學(xué)家，使我們的國家更強(qiáng)大。

Answer 1

My friend Julia
I have a friend named Julia. She has been with her grandparents since she was born in Fujian in 1998.
She likes English ,so she often reads English magazines ,watches English movies and keep on practising speaking English every day. She is fond of shopping in the Internet,because things are cheaper and nicer . she likes comfortable cotton clothes. It takes her 20- minute’s ride to school. She gets well along with her classmates. She does little exercise and has hamburgers and candies between two meals. I think she should do more exercise and eat more fruits and vegetables.
She dreams that there is no pollution on the earth and students can study on net school. She dreams to be a sicentist so that she can make our country stronger.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文主要寫Julia的愛好、學(xué)校生活、習(xí)慣和夢(mèng)想，全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如 pkeep on practising ， practising speaking，is fond of， gets well along with 等短語；過去分詞做定語named Julia；時(shí)間狀語從句since she was born in Fujian in 1998，結(jié)果狀語從句so she often reads English magazines ,watches English movies and keep on practising English every day，賓語從句she should do more exercise and eat more fruits and vegetables.和that there is no pollution on the earth and students can study on net school；目的狀語從句so that she can make our country stronger；不定式做賓語to be a sicentist 。 文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。