Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李雷,昨天你參與了學(xué)校值日。請寫一封信向校長匯報你值日時的所見所聞，并提出改進建議。要點如下：

值日見聞	1、校園不整潔，有學(xué)生亂扔垃圾，亂涂亂畫，摘花，踩草坪； 2、有學(xué)生吃垃圾食品，課后大聲喧嘩，互相打鬧，離開教室時忘記關(guān)燈； 3、考生自擬1-2點校園不文明行為。
建 議	考生自擬至少兩點。

要求：1、可以適當發(fā)揮，信中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
2、語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；
3、詞數(shù)：80詞左右。書信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Headmaster,
I was on duty yesterday. ……
Sincerely,
Li Lei

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Headmaster,
I was on duty yesterday. Now I'm writing to tell you that the school was untidy. Some students threw rubbish everywhere. Some students drew on the wall. I also found that some girls walked on the grass and picked flowers. During break time many students ate too much junk food. Many boys spoke quite loudly and fought with each other. After school, some students forgot to turn off the lights when leaving the classroom. What's more, a few students even rode their bicycles on the playground. I think we should make rules to change the situation and care about the environment, then our school will become more beautiful.
Sincerely,
Li Lei
【解析】本題是寫一篇給定材料的書面表達，寫作的話題為“匯報值日時的所見所聞及建議”，在寫作時應(yīng)注意符合題意，根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達要符合英語習(xí)慣。
寫作步驟：
一、閱讀提示，弄清所有信息，明確寫作要點。
1.昨天我值日。我給你寫信是告訴你校園不整潔。有學(xué)生亂扔垃圾。
2.有學(xué)生亂涂亂畫。有學(xué)生摘花兒，踩草坪。
3.課間許多學(xué)生吃垃圾食品。
4.一些學(xué)生大聲喧嘩，互相打鬧。
5.放學(xué)后有些學(xué)生忘記關(guān)燈。
6.我認為我們應(yīng)該制定規(guī)定來改變這種情況，讓學(xué)生關(guān)注環(huán)境，這樣我們的校園會更美。
二、根據(jù)要點，寫出關(guān)鍵詞、短語或句子。
1be on duty；I'm writing to tell you that……；throw rubbish everywhere
2. draw on the wall； walk on the grass；pick flowers。
3. during break time；eat too much junk food
4.speak loudly；fight with each other。
5.forget to do sth；turn off
6. make rules to change the situation；care about the environment。
三、組詞成句。連句成篇。注意使用一般過去時。