Question

Writing 8(2013江蘇南京白下區(qū))

    目前，有些中學(xué)生在“崇尚節(jié)儉，文明做人”方面做得不夠 好，在校園里有時(shí)會(huì)看到以下圖片中的情形。請(qǐng)你選擇以下現(xiàn) 象中的幾種或全部進(jìn)行描述,并就中學(xué)生如何“杜絕浪費(fèi)，文明 做人”提出至少兩點(diǎn)建議。

要求：l.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名、人名。

2. 語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。

3. 詞數(shù)80左右。文章的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。

    Some middle school students aren’t doing enough in “ advocating thrift and being civilized ”. 

Answer 1

Writing 8

[寫(xiě)作提示]

1. 審題:本文屬于議論文。主體時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

2. 確定要點(diǎn)：

(1) 描述圖片中的現(xiàn)象；

(2) 提出建議。

[參考范文]

    Some middle school students aren’t doing enough in “ advocating thrift and being civilizedM.

    We’re sorry to see so much waste in some schools!Some students have got into bad habits.For example,some often leave the taps on after washing their hands,and others sometimes leave lights on when they leave the classrooms. At the dining hall,a lot of food can be seen left on the table after the meals.What's worse,in the classroom,we often find that a lot of waste paper isn’t dropped in the right place. It makes others feel uncomfortable,especially in summer. In addition,some students like to write words or draw pictures on the wall or on the desk.

    As middle school students,we should save water and electricity.Don’t waste food. It's very necessary for us to keep the environment around us clean and tidy .Let's do them from now on!