Question

Writing 1(2015 北京)

    根據(jù)中文和英文提示，用英文寫(xiě)一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、 不少于50詞的郵件。郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞 數(shù)。所給提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫(xiě)出你的校名和姓名。

    假如你叫李華，你們學(xué)校為配合北京申辦冬奧會(huì)，倡導(dǎo)人人 都做文明中學(xué)生。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，給你的英國(guó)筆友Peter寫(xiě) 一封郵件，告訴他你認(rèn)為做個(gè)文明中學(xué)生什么是重要的，你通常 是怎么做的，以及你的感受。

提不詞語(yǔ)：think,smile,respect,say hello to,wait in line,on time,happy 

    Dear Peter, How is it going? At my school we’re talking about what we should do to be a good student. 

    Anything new at your school?

                         Yours,Li Hua

Answer 1

Writing 1

[寫(xiě)作提示]

1. 本文的話題是校園生活，學(xué)生比較熟悉。寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容充分體現(xiàn)了 社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀——文明、和諧。主體時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

2. 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

(1) 提出自己的觀點(diǎn)，做文明中學(xué)生什么樣的品德行為最為重 要；(一般現(xiàn)在時(shí))

(2) 說(shuō)出自己平時(shí)的禮貌行為；(一般現(xiàn)在時(shí))

(3) 表達(dá)自己對(duì)做文明中學(xué)生，具有良好品德的感受。(一般現(xiàn) 在時(shí))

3. 詞句亮點(diǎn)：

(1) I think it is important to be polite to others.本句不僅用賓語(yǔ)從句 豐富了句式而且含有il is+a辦+to do sth.句型;

(2) 1 feel happy for doing all these because it is right for a student to do so.本句含有because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句，豐富了句式，并且feel + a辦+for doing sth.與 it is right for a student to do so 句型的使用，使語(yǔ)言 更加多彩。

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Dear Peter,

    How is it going? At my school we’re talking about what we should do to be a good student.I think it is important to be polite lo others.I say hello to my teachers and classmates.I smile at everyone I talk to. Following rules is also important.I wait in line at the bus stop and go to school on time. I feel happy for doing all these because it is right for a student to do so.

    Anything new at your school?

                         Yours,Li Hua