Question

初中畢業(yè)在即，相信同學(xué)們?cè)谟⒄Z(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的過(guò)程中都會(huì)有不同的經(jīng)歷和感受。某英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)報(bào)“特別關(guān)注”欄目本期開(kāi)設(shè)的話題是“It is … to learn English”。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，為該欄目投稿。
要求：
（1）將題目補(bǔ)充完整;             （2）中心突出，語(yǔ)義連貫，層次清晰，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范;
（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名;（4）詞數(shù)80詞左右。
It is           to learn English

Answer 1

I didn’t like English before, because I didn’t thought it was useful if I didn’t go abroad. But a thing changed my opinion.
One day, my uncle bought a DVD player and he didn’t know how to use it, so he asked me for help. When I turned on the player, I found the language was English. I tried my best to follow the instructions with the help of a dictionary, and at last I knew the way of using it. I told my uncle how to use it and he praised me much. I felt very proud.
Ever since I have thought English is very useful in our everyday life. So I decide to learn it well.

試題分析：本文是一篇學(xué)習(xí)體會(huì)，給出一定的漢語(yǔ)提示。給考生發(fā)揮的余地 較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在自己能力范圍內(nèi)，選擇句式要賦予變化，這樣才能證明你能更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)整體。最后要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯與高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。因?yàn)槭呛��?bào)，故時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)較好，注意人稱(chēng)的轉(zhuǎn)換。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文用了很常見(jiàn)的短語(yǔ)如go abroad 出國(guó)  asked sb for help向某人求助  turn on 打開(kāi)  try one’s best to 努力做某事 with the help of 在某人幫助下。I told my uncle how to use it and he praised me much這個(gè)句子中and連接兩個(gè)句子，并且時(shí)態(tài)保持一致。Ever since I have thought English is very useful in our everyday life此句話中用了現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，并且有明顯的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)Ever since。這篇范文中還出現(xiàn)比較高級(jí)詞匯如change  instructions praise為文章增色不少。