Question

Writing 13(2011 重慶)

    一家知名外資企業(yè)準(zhǔn)備與當(dāng)?shù)卣�府合作修建一所�?guó)際學(xué) 校。為了建好、辦好學(xué)校，該企業(yè)總裁Mr.White廣泛征求學(xué)生意 見，并公開了他的郵箱地址。請(qǐng)你以“周杉”的名義給他寫一封 E-mml ,談?wù)勀愕膶幈M盡爭(zhēng)申。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)： 

1. 學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境(如：教室、操場(chǎng)……) ；

2. 特色課程(如：網(wǎng)球、鋼琴 ) ；

要求：

1. 詞數(shù):80詞左右，郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。

2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。

Dear Mr.White, 

     

                      Sincerely yours,

                         Zhou Shan

Answer 1

Writing 13 [寫作提示]

1. 審題:本文是以學(xué)生的名義向公司總裁提出建議并且寫明理 由，建議學(xué)生寫作時(shí)使用第一人稱，基本時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

2. 確定要點(diǎn)：①希望有一個(gè)什么樣的學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境(如：教室、操場(chǎng) 等) ；②希望學(xué)校開設(shè)哪些學(xué)生喜歡的特色課程(如：網(wǎng)球、鋼琴等) 。 [參考范文]

Dear Mr.White,

    I'm glad to hear you’ll build an international school,and I'd like to give you some advice. I think the new school should be nice and pleasant. Students need bright classrooms to study in,modem libraries to open up their eyes,large playgrounds to play different kinds of sports on.The school may provide students with some special courses,such as art,tennis or piano lessons.These courses can make students relaxed and encourage them to develop freely.lt would be better for students to have some chances to practice in your company so that they can get some useful experience.

    I hope I can enter the school.

                      Sincerely yours,

                         Zhou Shan