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【題目】書面表達(dá)

假設(shè)你是9年級(jí)學(xué)生Daniel，你遇到了一些問題，你寫信給21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)的“知心大姐”欄目，希望得到幫助。問題如下：

1. 作業(yè)太多，經(jīng)常熬夜，上課昏昏欲睡；

2. 喜歡籃球，曾經(jīng)參加校籃球隊(duì)的選拔，但沒有被接受；

3. 自認(rèn)為有表演天賦，夢(mèng)想做一名成功的演員，參加了戲劇俱樂部，去年在一部劇中扮演過主角，受到了高度贊揚(yáng)，但是這占用了很多的時(shí)間；

4．已經(jīng)想了很多方法來(lái)解決這些問題，但沒效果。希望……

要求： 1. 語(yǔ)句通順，書寫規(guī)范。

2. 文章必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，第4點(diǎn)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮1-2句。

3. 詞數(shù)100左右，文章開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)

Dear agony aunt,

I’m a Grade 9 student. These days I have some problems, and I don’t know how to deal with them.

Yours,

Daniel

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear agony aunt,

I’m a Grade 9 student. These days I have some problems, and I don’t know how to deal with them. I have too much homework to do every day. As a result, I often stay up late and I am sleepy in class. I like playing basket ball. I once tried out for the school basketball team, but failed. I think I have a gift for acting, and I dream of being a successful actor. So I joined the Drama Club. I even played a lead role in a play last year. I acted so well that I was thought highly of, but it takes me a great deal of time.

I have thought of many ways to solve these problems, but they don’t work. I hope you will tell me how to achieve a balance between my study and hobbies. Could you help me? Please write to me soon!

Yours,

Daniel

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封信。給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文按照寫作要求，根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)提示，用簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出漢語(yǔ)意思，語(yǔ)言流暢。文章開篇點(diǎn)題，提出自己遇到的問題，并尋求解決問題的辦法，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。