Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

An old couple in the seventies loved traveling. Every time they went away, they always left any money and a note on the table for a potential thief. This time they are taking a two-month trip to Guangdong to celebrate this year Spring Festival. They left a note which says, "I know you have suffered a lot this year. You must eager to go home to see your parents. Please take the money and buy a ticket. " In fact, a thief did break in a few years ago .He took out the money butleft everything else untouching. When asked how they did so, the husband said, "I believe people are born kindly .We should reach out a helping hand when somebody is in trouble.”

Answer 1

【答案】

An old couple in the seventies loved traveling. Every time they went away, they always left

their

any money and a note on the table for a potential thief. This time they are taking a two-month

some were

trip to Guangdong to celebrate this year Spring Festival. They left a note which says, "I know you

year’s said

have suffered a lot this year. You must∧ eager to go home to see your parents. Please take the

be

money and buy a ticket. " In fact, a thief did break in a few years ago .He took out the money but

left everything else untouching. When asked how they did so, the husband said, "I

untouched. why

believe people are born kindly .We should reach out a helping hand when somebody is in trouble.”

kind

【1】第一句 the---their

【2】第二句 any---some

【3】第三句are---were

【4】第三句 year—year’s

【5】第四句 says---said

【6】第五句 在must后面加be

【7】第八句 把out去掉

【8】第八句 untouching—untouched

【9】第九句how—why

【10】第十句kindly—kind

【解析】

【1】第一句 the---their 考查固定短語(yǔ)。 In one’s seventies“在某人70歲的時(shí)候”，故把the改為their。

【2】第二句 any---some 考查代詞的用法。這里是肯定意思，指留下一些錢，故把a(bǔ)ny改為some。

【3】第三句are---were 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。 文章講述過(guò)去的事情，應(yīng)該用過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)表示將來(lái)，故把a(bǔ)re改為were。

【4】第三句 year—year’s 考查名詞所有格。此處指今年的春節(jié)，是所有關(guān)系，故把year改為year’s。

【5】第四句 says---said 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。此處定語(yǔ)從句應(yīng)該用過(guò)去時(shí)，故把says改為said。

【6】第五句 在must后面加be。考查系動(dòng)詞。情態(tài)動(dòng)詞后面跟動(dòng)詞原形，eager是形容詞，故在eager前加be。

【7】第八句 把out去掉 考查副詞。此處指拿了錢就走了，而take out意思是“拿出”，故去掉out。

【8】第八句 untouching—untouched 考查過(guò)去分詞。此處是“leave+賓語(yǔ)+補(bǔ)語(yǔ)”結(jié)構(gòu)，untouch和賓語(yǔ)everything else之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，應(yīng)該用過(guò)去分詞，故把untouching改為untouched。

【9】第九句how—why 考查連詞。從句意可知此處是問(wèn)原因，故把how改為why。

【10】第十句kindly—kind 考查形容詞。Be born+形容詞或者名詞，表示“天生….”，故把kindly改為kind。