Question

2013年1月上旬，全國(guó)中東部地區(qū)17省市持續(xù)霧霾，陷入大范圍的重度和嚴(yán)重污染。造成這一現(xiàn)象的主要原因是工廠排出的廢氣和汽車尾氣等�，F(xiàn)請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下三個(gè)方面的提示，以“Let’s  do Something to Save Our Environment”為題寫一篇80-100字的短文。
1.重要性：只有一個(gè)地球
2.主要問(wèn)題：污染、疾病、災(zāi)難
3.措施：停止污染、保護(hù)大自然
參考詞匯：
disaster n.災(zāi)難    
fog and haze（hazy weather）霧霾

Answer 1

It is reported that there has been constant hazy weather in seventeen provinces in January,2003, which has led to a large area of heavy pollution in China.  Air pollution is universally believed to have been caused by waste gas from the factory and transportation. And various diseases resulted from it.
As we all know , there is only one earth to live in .It is our home. With social development, more and more pollution ,disease and disaster are ahead of us. If we continue damage to it ,nature will turn on us. We might have a terrible ending .
So stop pollution right away. Let’ s do more planting and use more public transportation as much as possible. And more severe regulations should be made to punish enterprise that cause pollution. Only in this way can we have a better living environment.

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文。2013年1月上旬，全國(guó)中東部地區(qū)17省市持續(xù)霧霾，陷入大范圍的重度和嚴(yán)重污染。造成這一現(xiàn)象的主要原因是工廠排出的廢氣和汽車尾氣等�，F(xiàn)請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下三個(gè)方面的提示，以“Let’s  do Something to Save Our Environment”為題寫一篇80-100字的短文。1.重要性：只有一個(gè)地球2.主要問(wèn)題：污染、疾病、災(zāi)難3.措施：停止污染、保護(hù)大自然.需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實(shí)。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型為文章潤(rùn)色。注意要求的詞數(shù)80-100詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】It is reported that there has been constant hazy weather in seventeen provinces in January,2003, which has led to a large area of heavy pollution in China. 這里含有一個(gè)主語(yǔ)從句和定語(yǔ)從句。Only in this way can we have a better living environment.這里使用了部分倒裝。