分析 高分句型:
句型一:
Feeling quite sorry for that(1),I begin to think about what to do (2)to help.因?yàn)闉榇烁械竭z憾,我開始考慮幫助做些什么.
(1)feeling quite sorry for that為現(xiàn)在分詞做原因狀語,書面表達(dá)中的分詞做狀語總是高分句型.
(2)what to do為"疑問詞+to do"在句中做介詞about的賓語,相當(dāng)于一個(gè)名詞性從句,為簡潔的表達(dá)方式.
句型二:
a good idea occurred to me (1)why not give (2)the rooms a thorough cleaning.我突然想到一個(gè)主意:何不把房間徹底打掃一下呢?
(1)a good idea occurred to sb.某人突然想到…
(2)why not …何不…,常常用來提出建議,本題中為說明idea的內(nèi)容的同位語.
句型三:
Tired as I was,I never felt so happy.雖然累,我從未如此開心過.
as 表示"雖然",引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句,必須要倒裝語序,將表語、謂語動詞中的實(shí)意動詞或做狀語的副詞提到句首;本句中是將做表語的tired 提到句首;倒裝也是書面表達(dá)中常見的高級句型.
解答 I am an 18-year old middle school student.I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework.Feeling quite sorry for that,I begin to think about what to do to help【高分句型一】.(做家務(wù)的理由)
Last Sunday,when my parents went out shopping,a good idea occurred to me why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning【高分句型二】?Firstly I collected all the books,newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place.Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture.After that,I swept and mopped the floors.(做家務(wù)的過程)
At this very moment,my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining.My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes.Tired as I was,I never felt so happy【高分句型三】.(我的感受)
點(diǎn)評 寫作時(shí)首先審題要到位:審體裁、人稱和時(shí)態(tài);審要點(diǎn).其次要考慮高分詞語和句型的選用,從句、非謂語動詞、倒裝、強(qiáng)調(diào)句型等都是可考慮的高級句型;詞語和句型的選用要包含作者的感情色彩和增強(qiáng)表達(dá)的氣勢;再次,運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞如besides、what's more、moreover、for one thing …for another等,使文字更加流暢.
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