Question

8．最近，你所在的學校就如何處理城鎮(zhèn)垃圾向?qū)W生征文．請你以"Saving our city"為題，寫一篇150詞左右的短文．
提示：1．城鎮(zhèn)垃圾的危害：污染環(huán)境，有害健康．
2．你所在的城鎮(zhèn)是如何處理垃圾的：
a．垃圾分類    b．報紙、玻璃的再利用  c．填埋有害垃圾  d．處理廢水、廢氣
3．自己應(yīng)該做些什么：
a．盡我們的所能，愛護環(huán)境，保護環(huán)境  b．…
It's important to deal with the rubbish in cities．               

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容分成三部分：一垃圾的危害；二所在城鎮(zhèn)是如何處理垃圾的；三自己應(yīng)該做的事．
1．The rest，which（引導定語從句，代指先行詞The rest） is believed to be harmful，is sent to a certain place and buried．
那些被認為是有害的垃圾會被送到某個特別的地方掩埋．
2．Laws have been passed to protect the environment，so waste water should be  treated before it is poured into rivers．have been passed 是現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)的被動語態(tài)，表示"已經(jīng)被通過"； should be  treated 是情態(tài)動詞的被動，表示"應(yīng)該被處理"；is poured 是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)的被動語態(tài)，表示"被傾倒"
環(huán)保的法律已經(jīng)被通過，因此廢水在流入河流之前應(yīng)該被處理．

解答 Saving Our City   
It is very important to deal with the rubbish in cities．Rubbish must be treated properly，otherwise it may cause problems．It may pollute the air and water．If people breathe the polluted air or drink the polluted water，they may get ill．（垃圾的危害）
Our city has begun to pay attention to the problem．For example，rubbish is sorted．Some rubbish，such as newspapers and glass，is recycled．The rest，which is believed to be harmful，is sent to a certain place and buried【高分句型一】．Laws have been passed to protect the environment，so waste water should be  treated before it is poured into rivers．【高分句型二】（所在城鎮(zhèn)是如何處理垃圾的）
We've been trying，but there is still a long way to go．We should do our best to fight against pollution and protect our environment．At least，we should form the good habit of not throwing rubbish everywhere．（自己應(yīng)該做）

點評 這是一篇表格類文章，內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，學生切入容易，話題貼近學生的生活，具有時代性，可寫性，學生有話可說．要求學生寫出垃圾的危害，處理的辦法和可以采取的措施．要完全涵蓋所給中文，采用高級詞匯和多樣句型，恰當使用連詞，使文章連貫自然．